Reviews from

Coffee Shop Beginning

An important bump the effects long lasting.

3 total reviews 
Comment from JLR
Excellent
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To emotively deliver a thoughtful message within a meager 17 syllables requires command of word usage and presentation of skills of a writer who has honed their skills. Your is a solid representation of this and complement the contest participation. Good luck in the booth.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022
    Thank you so much for the read and the encouraging review.
Comment from Terry Broxson
Excellent
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LOL, excellent entry for the contest, good luck. Just looking at the picture, and being a guy myself, I am thinking (if the picture reflects reality) that you did a whole better than she did! Good work. Terry.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
    Thank you for the read and review. Yes, I had the same feeling as you.
Comment from jessizero
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

That's a very epic, romantic story that you managed to tell in just 17 syllables! I am very impressed with this one. Thank you for choosing to share it.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
    Again, thanks for taking the time to read, review and the six star honor.