"The Gift of Life 2003"
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Comment from Leann DS
Words of this poem are very good and flow nicely from line to line. The content gives one much to think about.
You might want to check this specific line to make sure it is the way you meant it to be:
'And, what we could you do?:
Thanks for sharing. Have a great week.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Words of this poem are very good and flow nicely from line to line. The content gives one much to think about.
You might want to check this specific line to make sure it is the way you meant it to be:
'And, what we could you do?:
Thanks for sharing. Have a great week.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Oh thank you Leann for your five star review!
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Comment from prettybluebirds
I understood instantly that you were writing this as your son Jason. Do you think he knew all his organs were going to others? Does it make you feel better knowing that parts of your son live on? I have always wondered how parents felt after organs of their loved ones lived on in another body.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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I understood instantly that you were writing this as your son Jason. Do you think he knew all his organs were going to others? Does it make you feel better knowing that parts of your son live on? I have always wondered how parents felt after organs of their loved ones lived on in another body.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Why thank you so much for stopping by again and reviewing.
Unless you're probably one of the few that would realize what you're reading in the beginning.
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