One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Fei Ma
The poem is lovely and beautiful. It is inspiring too.
I read it repeatedly. I will read it again in the future.
A friend of mine writes Haiku. Every time I read her pieces, I enjoy them.
Now I see you put together a collection of Haiku. That is so wonderful.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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The poem is lovely and beautiful. It is inspiring too.
I read it repeatedly. I will read it again in the future.
A friend of mine writes Haiku. Every time I read her pieces, I enjoy them.
Now I see you put together a collection of Haiku. That is so wonderful.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and six stars! You're very kind.
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Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
Your poems are usually short .. you did a great job in capturing the melancholy in this unusual format for you.
Most lovers have a song that they both cherish , they dance to and sing during their relationship.
If their love dies and the two take different paths hearing that particular song later tugs at their heart .. it's a reminder of what that had and now have lost.
I like sad poems. I enjoyed the read!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Ciao!
Your poems are usually short .. you did a great job in capturing the melancholy in this unusual format for you.
Most lovers have a song that they both cherish , they dance to and sing during their relationship.
If their love dies and the two take different paths hearing that particular song later tugs at their heart .. it's a reminder of what that had and now have lost.
I like sad poems. I enjoyed the read!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Ciao :)
Thank you very much for your exceptional review and six stars! You're very kind.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
This is so beautifully done, Gypsy! I wish you put this one into the site Free Verse contest ! I think you really captured the feeling of missing and mourning a loved one from a past relationship.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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This is so beautifully done, Gypsy! I wish you put this one into the site Free Verse contest ! I think you really captured the feeling of missing and mourning a loved one from a past relationship.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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I keep missing the free verse site contest :( Thank you very much for the beautiful review and kind words, I really appreciate it. Have a great weekend, Helen!
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and there's no doubt about it----songs can reach into your gizzards and rip them out, but in a good way also, not just crappy!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and there's no doubt about it----songs can reach into your gizzards and rip them out, but in a good way also, not just crappy!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for the beautiful review and kind words, I really appreciate it. Have a great weekend!
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Comment from aryr
What a delightful free verse, Gypsy. I loved the picture which showed the loneliness that encompasses one. I really enjoyed that you broke it down to the three areas- the sky, the music and tonight. It was an intense breakdown with sadness surrounding it. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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What a delightful free verse, Gypsy. I loved the picture which showed the loneliness that encompasses one. I really enjoyed that you broke it down to the three areas- the sky, the music and tonight. It was an intense breakdown with sadness surrounding it. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Lady Aryr, thank you very much for the beautiful review and kind words, I really appreciate it. Have a great weekend! Blessed be.
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be and hugs! Ahaaa, now I am a lady, lol.
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Yes :). Lady Aryr sounds right . Blessed be.
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Then, Lady it is.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Beautifully crafted both in presentation and a very poignant free verse poem where hearing a song brings painful memories of a deceitful love.
Powerful and beautiful
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Beautifully crafted both in presentation and a very poignant free verse poem where hearing a song brings painful memories of a deceitful love.
Powerful and beautiful
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for the beautiful review and kind words, I really appreciate it. Have a great weekend!
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Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
In this poem, you long for someone no longer near you. I love the poignancy of your work--the way you express loss.
Excellent work, Gypsy.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Gypsy,
In this poem, you long for someone no longer near you. I love the poignancy of your work--the way you express loss.
Excellent work, Gypsy.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for the beautiful review and kind words, I really appreciate it. Have a great weekend! Blessings.
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Comment from AP Apgar
Good free verse - Not familiar with your subject - seems to be a story about a lonely girl who's memories about a person from her past are being triggered by first the Starry sky and then some music playing in the background while she sits alone looking out her open window. Hopefully the guy below her window will sing her a new song? Hug.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Good free verse - Not familiar with your subject - seems to be a story about a lonely girl who's memories about a person from her past are being triggered by first the Starry sky and then some music playing in the background while she sits alone looking out her open window. Hopefully the guy below her window will sing her a new song? Hug.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, AP, for your review and feedback, I appreciate it. Best wishes.
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Comment from royowen
Well done with this Gypsy, an amazing post, with passion dripping from each articulate syllable, and the words of romantic but tragic love woven into each line, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Well done with this Gypsy, an amazing post, with passion dripping from each articulate syllable, and the words of romantic but tragic love woven into each line, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Roy, for your review and feedback, I appreciate it. Best wishes.
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Most welcome
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Gypsy,
what a delight to read this poem, though somewhat sad. Music has the power to transform us to another time, another scene. I can't recall a time when I heard a song that it transported me to an unpleasant event in my life, it usually brings back pleasant memories. I loved the picture you chose and the blue font on the black background is striking. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Hello Gypsy,
what a delight to read this poem, though somewhat sad. Music has the power to transform us to another time, another scene. I can't recall a time when I heard a song that it transported me to an unpleasant event in my life, it usually brings back pleasant memories. I loved the picture you chose and the blue font on the black background is striking. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and feedback, I appreciate it. Best wishes and blessings.
Gypsy hugs