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Origins of Dreams

A poem about where dreams originate

3 total reviews 
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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In sleeping ears?? A misspelled word? Pls explain.
This is a well written piece and ask many questions with given answers.
Insightful for any who takes the time to read... for two points but most will overlook your thoughts in need of points to promote their own work. Peculiar way of winning a contest. Buy it.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
    Thank you for taking the time to review my poem and for the excellent rating. "In sleeping, ears we whisper clues" refers to the angels whispering clues into peoples' ears while they sleep. I hope that answers your question :) When you say, "buy it" do you mean member dollars? I had considered that, but they are rather pricy. Have a wonderful day, and thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
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I enjoyed reading your poem. The flow was smooth. As for punctuation I also have had conflicting advice. I am not qualified to critique your punctuation. However, I loved the poem. It was an easy read. Good luck!

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
    Thank you for taking the time to review my poem and for your kind words. I appreciate the excellent reading!
Comment from Mickamus J
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Thanks for your poem. It was a relatable insight into how dreams are coming to us. It gave a different perspective from the ones that we know of. It is interesting to know how every aspect of the spiritual fanfare was addressed.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
    I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem. Thank you very much for the excellent rating. May all your dreams be good!