Comment from aryr

Excellent

A great picture, I loved the picture of the peony and the bee, Gypsy. Your words were great because they showed the effect that the flower has on the bees. Blessed be n hugs.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022

Thank you very much, Aryr. It's always good to hear from you, my friend. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

This is well written 5-7-5 poem and I will add beautiful as the artwork you chose compliments the beauty of your words.
I enjoyed the splendor
Best wishes and regards,
Mary

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022

Thank you very much, Mary. It's always good to hear from you.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from AP Apgar

Excellent

I like you poem - a good Haiku - about a flower in nature = giving it a personality - flirting with the bee population and being fickle - allowing them to have their way - drink their fill and get drunk on her nectar -
very clever - nicely done = good job

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022

Thank you, AP:)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and well written 5-7-5 poem about the splendid peony. You used great descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022

Thank you very much for your excellent review.

Gypsy

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

I like this beautiful peony in Chinese painting style. Haha. Its nectar made bee drunk. I like the alliteration in the second line. I hope my peonies will bloom soon.

Well done.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022

Thank you very much, Lisa, for your excellent review. Coming from you it means a lot. I hope your peonies bloom soon.

Gypsy

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Gypsy,

Those poorly informed bees, can't they read the signs of flirtation and the leaves?

Good combo with selected image and your color scheme.

Mark

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022

Thank you very much for your excellent review.

Gypsy

Comment from juliaSjames

Excellent

Nicely composed, Gypsy. The voluptuous flower in full bloom draws the comparison to a beautiful woman with many admirers, intoxicated with desire. Thanks for sharing and for your author notes on the 5/7/5 form.

Stay safe and blessed

Julia

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022

Thank you very much, Julia, for your excellent review. Blessing to you too :)

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like the symbolism you used here. The peony is like an attractive woman who is "flirtatious and fickle." The bees are like the men that are falling all over her as if "drunk with nectar."

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022

Thank you very much for your excellent review. I didn't know about the symbolism lol I write haiku that come straight from my heart and I guess there is some subconscious symbolism going on. It's my muse's fault.

Gypsy

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy---I like it, plant sex--err--maybe that's just my take on it? My mind is shallow and always goes straight to the gutter and stays there!

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022

Thank you very much, Mike, for your excellent review.

Gypsy

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello Gypsy :)
I enjoyed the imagery in your 5/7/5 poem - The merry bee, flirting with the peony - very sweet! I also enjoyed the alliteration in line two.
Lovely!
Best wishes as always, Debra :)

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022

Thank you very much for your excellent review.

Gypsy