My Family
I love them.8 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are lucky to have such a large family and my only regret in life is that I didn't have more children when I had the chance, family is everything. There is much love in these words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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You are lucky to have such a large family and my only regret in life is that I didn't have more children when I had the chance, family is everything. There is much love in these words, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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Yes, thanks
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a lovely, moving poem that I really enjoyed. Your family had ALL the necessary elements that create a wonderful existence. Some families show their love in numerous ways rather that verbalizing their love. Most importantly, your parents told you about the Lord.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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This is a lovely, moving poem that I really enjoyed. Your family had ALL the necessary elements that create a wonderful existence. Some families show their love in numerous ways rather that verbalizing their love. Most importantly, your parents told you about the Lord.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Yes, thanks!
Comment from LJbutterfly
It sounds as though you grew up in a beautiful family of loving siblings with God-fearing parents. Your poem is warm, heartfelt, and delightful. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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It sounds as though you grew up in a beautiful family of loving siblings with God-fearing parents. Your poem is warm, heartfelt, and delightful. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
What a wonderful tribute to your family and a snapshot of your life - including your faith, where you turn for answers. It's not too long, you say what you need to say, and the rhyming helps the poem to flow. Nice job on this.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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What a wonderful tribute to your family and a snapshot of your life - including your faith, where you turn for answers. It's not too long, you say what you need to say, and the rhyming helps the poem to flow. Nice job on this.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thanks, it was heartfelt!
Comment from oliver818
This is a nice poem about your family and a very good entry for this competition. You describe it well and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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This is a nice poem about your family and a very good entry for this competition. You describe it well and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much!
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well written poem. Your poem reads, and flows well. Your poem expresses fond memories of your parents, which is a blessing. I liked the consistent rhyming scheme throughout the poem. Nice job.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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This is a well written poem. Your poem reads, and flows well. Your poem expresses fond memories of your parents, which is a blessing. I liked the consistent rhyming scheme throughout the poem. Nice job.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you!
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You're welcome.
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I am glad you love my poem. My poems are heartfelt.
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You're welcome.
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Comment from jessizero
This poem was very pretty. It sounds like your parents taught you everything you would need to know. Thank you for choosing to share this, and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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This poem was very pretty. It sounds like your parents taught you everything you would need to know. Thank you for choosing to share this, and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Leann DS
Your poem about family has good rhyme and nice rhythm. You have addressed many different aspects and characteristics of your specific family growing up. It was enjoyable to read. Good luck to you in the contest, and I hope you have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Your poem about family has good rhyme and nice rhythm. You have addressed many different aspects and characteristics of your specific family growing up. It was enjoyable to read. Good luck to you in the contest, and I hope you have a blessed day.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you!
