Comment from Debi Pick Marquette

Average

Raul, it sounds like you have a lovely family. That is truly a blessing to embrace. However, you have some capitalization, punctuation & grammar errors, that may help in the contest if corrected. Also some incomplete sentences, so you might want to complete one thought, before starting another. I don't mean to be negative, but as a fan & friend, I just want to be helpful. I am very happy though, that you have such a loving family. Good luck in the contest Raul! God Bless! Debi

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022

Thank you!

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I like your family poem. Families need each other, as you've said. I am sure you will do well in the contest. Keep up the good work, and best of wishes to you.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022

Thank you!

Comment from RodG

Excellent

The Speaker makes it very clear how the family is there for each other, providing care, support, and love. In stanza three you briefly tell us how it's there for ME. Could you go into more detail?

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022

Thank you! Okay, I have more details. Is it now good enough for five stars? Please check.

reply by RodG on 30-Mar-2022

Yes, your poem is much better and I added a star to my rating.