Sunshine and Blue Sky
Healing pair12 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Another good win - congratulations! There is no doubt that sunshine can elevate one's mood - "Hope returns, strength and energy too". Your poem is as uplifting as blue skies and the "promise of blessing too".
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Another good win - congratulations! There is no doubt that sunshine can elevate one's mood - "Hope returns, strength and energy too". Your poem is as uplifting as blue skies and the "promise of blessing too".
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your supportive words and congratulations. With all our rain over the last few months I am greatly appreciating our sunshine and blue skies when we do get them.
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, SUNSHINE AND BLUE SKY, follows the vertical, first-letter theme and reminds the readers that the sunlight can brighten one's spirits and shine on possibilities that may otherwise be unnoticed.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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This acrostic poem, SUNSHINE AND BLUE SKY, follows the vertical, first-letter theme and reminds the readers that the sunlight can brighten one's spirits and shine on possibilities that may otherwise be unnoticed.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much Bill. I appreciate your review!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This is very well thought through and written. Thanks for writing it and good luck in the challenge. There are some other good entries. ................................
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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This is very well thought through and written. Thanks for writing it and good luck in the challenge. There are some other good entries. ................................
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you Tom. You are right- thanks for the good wishes.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Wendy:
To me, acrostic poems are really difficult to write.
You've done an excellent job on yours.
You mention hope, energy, and blessings, gifts bestowed from above; the sun is like the Son, where all life begins and is nurtured and nourished.
I like your excellent photo and layout.
Great poem, Wendy.
Good luck
Cindy
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Wendy:
To me, acrostic poems are really difficult to write.
You've done an excellent job on yours.
You mention hope, energy, and blessings, gifts bestowed from above; the sun is like the Son, where all life begins and is nurtured and nourished.
I like your excellent photo and layout.
Great poem, Wendy.
Good luck
Cindy
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much Cindy. Your words are so encouraging and supportive!
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You?re welcome, Wendy!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
If there is sunshine the day seems brighter. We have had many days of gloomy weather lately and this morning we had a light cover of snow. I think we are definitely ready for spring to come. Goodbye winter.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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If there is sunshine the day seems brighter. We have had many days of gloomy weather lately and this morning we had a light cover of snow. I think we are definitely ready for spring to come. Goodbye winter.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Exactly. Sunshine somehow makes everything just a little easier to cope with.
Comment from in777wr#
This is a very well written Acrostic poem. Your poem reads and flows well. There are few things that are as peaceful as the sun shining, and blue skies. Very nice complimentary picture.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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This is a very well written Acrostic poem. Your poem reads and flows well. There are few things that are as peaceful as the sun shining, and blue skies. Very nice complimentary picture.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much. I am very glad you enjoyed it. Sunshine helps everything.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is nothing like a bit of sunshine to lift our spirits, warm our body and fill us with a sense of worth, I enjoyed the journey through your poem here, I am filled with light now, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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There is nothing like a bit of sunshine to lift our spirits, warm our body and fill us with a sense of worth, I enjoyed the journey through your poem here, I am filled with light now, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much. A lively review - I appreciate your comments.
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I meant ?lovely?.
Comment from RodG
Your Acrostic reminds us how quickly sunshine and blue skies can change our moods and provide happiness. This is nicely summarized in your final stanza. Though your poem is too heavy-handed in rhyme for my taste, I certainly appreciate its message. Rod
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Your Acrostic reminds us how quickly sunshine and blue skies can change our moods and provide happiness. This is nicely summarized in your final stanza. Though your poem is too heavy-handed in rhyme for my taste, I certainly appreciate its message. Rod
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your review and thoughts. Appreciated, as always.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
I do think we could all use more natural nature medicine, so to speak.
The air is not as pure as it once was, man has caused this unfortunately.
God gave a clean slate, and now, it is full of waste. I enjoyed reading your poem. And like the picture of what all fields should look like. Thank you for the awareness.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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I do think we could all use more natural nature medicine, so to speak.
The air is not as pure as it once was, man has caused this unfortunately.
God gave a clean slate, and now, it is full of waste. I enjoyed reading your poem. And like the picture of what all fields should look like. Thank you for the awareness.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much. A thoughtful review. I appreciate it.
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You are welcome.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your acrostic Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your acrostic Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful and encouraging review, and good wishes. All are greatly appreciated.
