THE CURSE
Viewing comments for Chapter 108 "The Unexpected Guests/Pt 5"The six book of the Novels of the Breedline
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Comment from AJ McCall
LOLOLOLOLOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
"The talented author who lived upstairs next to Ryan..." WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!
SHANAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
I can't believe you actually did that LOL. (Yes I CAN believe it.) That is so awesome! Okay first off, I want to say I liked the little changes you made to the previous post and I'M SO GLAD THAT CARRIE'S OKAY!!
I also laughed when I read the description of myself, because I do have poufy hair, and I am a beautiful ebony lol. BUT HOW THE HECK DID I FALL FOR RACCOONS!!!!??? Have me come back and say like, "I knew it wasn't raccoons..." LOL. But no, seriously this was really cool and FUNNY!
I saw your reply and I was like: "OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO..."
I literally yelled when I first read the part with me in it lol.
But enough about me; I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! (I already kinda know since you told me but... I'M STILL EXCITED!)
SIX STARSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SHANA!!!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
LOLOLOLOLOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
"The talented author who lived upstairs next to Ryan..." WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!
SHANAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
I can't believe you actually did that LOL. (Yes I CAN believe it.) That is so awesome! Okay first off, I want to say I liked the little changes you made to the previous post and I'M SO GLAD THAT CARRIE'S OKAY!!
I also laughed when I read the description of myself, because I do have poufy hair, and I am a beautiful ebony lol. BUT HOW THE HECK DID I FALL FOR RACCOONS!!!!??? Have me come back and say like, "I knew it wasn't raccoons..." LOL. But no, seriously this was really cool and FUNNY!
I saw your reply and I was like: "OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO..."
I literally yelled when I first read the part with me in it lol.
But enough about me; I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! (I already kinda know since you told me but... I'M STILL EXCITED!)
SIX STARSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SHANA!!!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thanks AJ :) So thrilled you liked this one. I thought you'd get a kick out of your character's scene. The "racoon" idea just popped into my head, knowing you would laugh about it. Hee-hee!
I'm working on the wedding, which is difficult because I want to make it just right and there are scenes that need to be addressed. Then, I will write in someone going into labor during the reception. I want this to be heartfelt with a fairytale ending. Hopefully I can finish this with one or two more chapters. I know this... I'm going to celebrate when this book is finished.
Stay tuned for more Breedline adventures.
Big hugs!
Shana :)
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Aww, you're welcome!! I always enjoy reading your posts (especially if it has me in them, lol.) I'm sure you'll write a beautiful wedding scene... you got a thing with description... And going into labor during the reception... I'm guessing that's going to be Carrie... OOO, Oh my gosh I can't wait to read it!!!!! (Btw, that's some hardcore stuff LOL. Starting to have a baby during a wedding? SHEESH. I LOVE IT! CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT!
And you know if you need help with any of it... (you already know what I'm going to say)
And a celebration? Man, I wish I could come... ;) ;) I gotta a feeling the ending will be perfect...
;) ;)
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Thanks so much, AJ :) BTW, it's not Carrie that's having a baby.
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You're welcome! AND IT'S NOT!!!!!????!!
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WHATTTT? NO! THEN WHO IS IT!!!
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AND WHAT'S RYAN'S SECRETTTTTTTT???!?!?!?!?!?!? I HAVE TO KNOW THESE THINGS...???!?!?!?!
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I'm fixing to put a chapter in. It will give away everything you need to know. :)
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YAY! LOL. ;)
Comment from Shirley McLain
I enjoyed reading this chapter. How many are left? You did a great job, and I found no errors. This almost seemed like the end. Have a wonderful evening. Shirley
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
I enjoyed reading this chapter. How many are left? You did a great job, and I found no errors. This almost seemed like the end. Have a wonderful evening. Shirley
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Shirley :) I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. It really motivates me to hear positive feedback. I appreciate it!
I will have one or two chapters to write in this one. There will be a happy ending with a wedding and a new baby. Hopefully I will get a lot done this weekend.
My books always end with that "good" feeling. Then, I plan to go back and revise my first two books. After that, I have two more ideas for the next books to come. Book #7 is called Living Nightmares and book #8 is called Vampirism in Manhattan. They will be in the same series. I'm looking forward to starting those.
Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent story indeed my friend! The storyline is captivating and held my attention throughout the piece and the characters interact nicely together and the imagery is perfect and spot on;-)
Thank you for sharing this well written piece with us and may God bless you and your family!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
Excellent story indeed my friend! The storyline is captivating and held my attention throughout the piece and the characters interact nicely together and the imagery is perfect and spot on;-)
Thank you for sharing this well written piece with us and may God bless you and your family!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much, Melodie :)
So happy you enjoyed the chapter. It's been a lot of work, but fun to create. I just have one or two more chapters in this one and then off to the editor. Hopefully I can get some writing done this weekend. It's always exciting to finally see your book in print. I look forward to that.
God bless :)
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment from royowen
I can't help the thought coming through my mind, a bit hackneyed but, all's well that ends well. You've written a most satisfying conclusion to the encounter between the Shadow and the covenant, plus a couple of ring-ins in the form of Frank and Manuel. As always, beautifully written Shana, blessings Roy
Typo : A dark complected woman, complexioned?
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
I can't help the thought coming through my mind, a bit hackneyed but, all's well that ends well. You've written a most satisfying conclusion to the encounter between the Shadow and the covenant, plus a couple of ring-ins in the form of Frank and Manuel. As always, beautifully written Shana, blessings Roy
Typo : A dark complected woman, complexioned?
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much, Roy :) I should have just one more chapter to end this book. It will be a heartfelt ending with a wedding and a new baby.
This has taken me longer than any of the others. Hopefully it will get more attention. Your support means a lot to me. And thanks for the typo. I fixed that.
You're the best!
Always your fan,
Shana :)
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You?re a good writer, this is great writing Shana
Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
Your story exhibits a great deal of imagination. The writer has a lot of freedom when writing about the dark side. Your story is intriguing, and the book should be a great success. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
Your story exhibits a great deal of imagination. The writer has a lot of freedom when writing about the dark side. Your story is intriguing, and the book should be a great success. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much, Rachel :)
I appreciate your positive feedback. It really motivates me to keep on writing.
This has been so fun to write. I should have one more chapter to this book and it will be off to the editor. I sure hope readers enjoy this one. My stories always end with that good feeling.
Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)