"The Gift of Life 2003"
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Comment from Leann DS
This poem has a touching sentiment and is very relatable. I like the rhythmic flow you used.
If I may, please check out this one part... I'm not sure if it is supposed to be this word or if it is an error/typo:He realized more than han both me and you.
* han??
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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This poem has a touching sentiment and is very relatable. I like the rhythmic flow you used.
If I may, please check out this one part... I'm not sure if it is supposed to be this word or if it is an error/typo:He realized more than han both me and you.
* han??
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Why thanks for your review again and I'll have to check this one for a typo.
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Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
The loss of a child brings pain beyond comprehension.
The year may ease the tears but never the tears in the heart.
The grief for your child is still very evident in your poetry.
I trust that writing about it proves in some small way cathartic.
Warmly,
Juliette
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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The loss of a child brings pain beyond comprehension.
The year may ease the tears but never the tears in the heart.
The grief for your child is still very evident in your poetry.
I trust that writing about it proves in some small way cathartic.
Warmly,
Juliette
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2022
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Yes Juliet.
And, writing does help a lot as I grieve through my work.
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