Heaven Or Hell
Contest Entry 78 Word 3 Sentence: Dedicated to God34 total reviews
Comment from Annette R.
The RED color is appreciated. The requirements were challenging, and, in this reader's, opinion accomplished especially the one of not mentioning any religion. As good an explanation for life on earth leading to the next life as any.
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The RED color is appreciated. The requirements were challenging, and, in this reader's, opinion accomplished especially the one of not mentioning any religion. As good an explanation for life on earth leading to the next life as any.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
Comment from tfawcus
I am awarding you five stars for adhering to the strict rules of this highly restrictive contest. You have produced an entry that instructs the reader in God's method of selecting candidates for Heaven and Hell.
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I am awarding you five stars for adhering to the strict rules of this highly restrictive contest. You have produced an entry that instructs the reader in God's method of selecting candidates for Heaven and Hell.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
Comment from amahra
You did a great job of using all of the qualifying words to create this very short story. The artwork you chose for your poem was quite appropriate for the writing. Excellent job!
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You did a great job of using all of the qualifying words to create this very short story. The artwork you chose for your poem was quite appropriate for the writing. Excellent job!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
Comment from Raul1
It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. This story meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
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It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. This story meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
Comment from LJbutterfly
As your 78 word fictional story states, God is omniscient, omnipotent, and omnipresent, but He never said life on earth would be easy. Man would experience tests and trials, as well as God's love. The interesting thing about this fictional piece is that it expresses non-fictional truths. Best wishes in the contest.
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As your 78 word fictional story states, God is omniscient, omnipotent, and omnipresent, but He never said life on earth would be easy. Man would experience tests and trials, as well as God's love. The interesting thing about this fictional piece is that it expresses non-fictional truths. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your poem. It is well written and creative. You did a nice job with the detailed prompt and this is a good entry. Your writing coveys how emotionally connected you are to your faith, that is commendable.
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It is well written and creative. You did a nice job with the detailed prompt and this is a good entry. Your writing coveys how emotionally connected you are to your faith, that is commendable.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
Comment from Versch
You are absolutely right in what you wrote here. God has given us everything we need to live a decent life. He gives us all sorts of problem in order to test our faith. Those who pass go to heaven and those who don't go to hell. Good luck in the contest.
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You are absolutely right in what you wrote here. God has given us everything we need to live a decent life. He gives us all sorts of problem in order to test our faith. Those who pass go to heaven and those who don't go to hell. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is so true. We are given choices. To choose between doing good or bad. When judgment day arrives, there will be no chance to change your way of living. We are tested each day. Thank you for the awareness.
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This is so true. We are given choices. To choose between doing good or bad. When judgment day arrives, there will be no chance to change your way of living. We are tested each day. Thank you for the awareness.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Grammatically, it deserves a five; but I don't see a story.
I disagree with the doctrine presented in your work, but that, I don't believe, is within a reviewer's purview. With the limitations of the specific rules of this seventy-eight word contest, any such critique would be unfair.
Best wishes.
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Grammatically, it deserves a five; but I don't see a story.
I disagree with the doctrine presented in your work, but that, I don't believe, is within a reviewer's purview. With the limitations of the specific rules of this seventy-eight word contest, any such critique would be unfair.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
Comment from jwsteele
Dear, Sir,
As usual your work is deep and spiritually satisfying. You see things from a higher perspective. For me, you are like the prophet in the movie The Book of Eli. That is my highest compliment. I hope ALL of this prophecy comes to pass. It is sorely necessary to separate the wheat from the chaff. The spirit is real and a time will come when like shall be with like.
Many blessings to you.
jw
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Dear, Sir,
As usual your work is deep and spiritually satisfying. You see things from a higher perspective. For me, you are like the prophet in the movie The Book of Eli. That is my highest compliment. I hope ALL of this prophecy comes to pass. It is sorely necessary to separate the wheat from the chaff. The spirit is real and a time will come when like shall be with like.
Many blessings to you.
jw
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
