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The Red Boat

Putin gathers souls

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Comment from Pearl Edwards
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And wouldn't that be a good scenerio the darlings of the deep sending Putin to the bottom of the sea with much blood on his hands. Here's hoping someone does. Good luck in the contest K, enjoyed your entrant.
cheers
valda

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
    Hi Valda, Putin is loosing his grip. Definitely a nut case. He can't win because too many nations have cut him off. Thank you my friend. K xx
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a powerful write filled with the blood shed of the Ukrainian people at the hands of a crazy and unstable man who lied repeatedly as he gathered troops before the invasion stating it was just a military exercise. This liar will eventually pay the price for his treachery we hope, a fine write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
    Hi Dolly, I was angry the day I wrote that poem. I think we are all angry at the slaughter of innocents! He will be judged, I hope the Americans go get him like Bin Laden and Sadam Hussain (found down a rat hole.) No one is above God's law. He wants to be just like Hitler. Not if we gather against him. Oz is sending aid in the form of food and ammunition. I'll get off my soapbox now! Love, Kay xx
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 30-Mar-2022
    I?m glad you got on your soap box Kay, the world needs to do the same x x x
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
    He's in strife now; has no general on the ground, no plan and his own people are revolting against his actions. Yippee!
Comment from l.raven
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HI Kace, I can't believe what he is getting
away with...he should have been stopped...

every time I watch what is going on I cry...
these people are just like us...they were living
in their country just as we do...

I do believe in God...and I pray He gets here soon...
putin needs to pay for all the deaths he has taken...
he's killing innocent people...children...

your poem is very well written sweetie pie...and your words
are so very true...I love your poem...and your picture...perfect...love you much my wonderful friend...Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
    Hello Wombat. Thanks for reading. I was angry the day I wrote this. He is aiming to be Hitler 2.Tonight I see war breaking out in Tel Aviv. Haven't the Jewish folk had enough? I believe we are in the last days as the Bible forecast. I am pleased that allies have banded together against this war criminal. Any bullets in your .45? Hope all is well my friend. Love, Kace xx
Comment from aryr
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Good luck wishes in the No Rules Poetry contest, Kay. This was a perfect picture of Putin as he according to your poem succumbed to Satan. Your words and the back ground color were very much enjoyed as they told of Putin's reign of failure.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
    Thank you for reading my friend. Just my thoughts on what may happen. Love, Kay xx
reply by aryr on 29-Mar-2022
    Most welcome, Kay.
Comment from oliver818
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This is a good poem for this competition. You bring up a sad and challenging piece of modern history that we should be talking about more. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
    Hello Oliver, Thanks for reading. Glad you liked. Blessings from Oz. K xx
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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If only . . . I love the picture you've chosen - Putin looking at his watch. I firmly believe he feels like he's running out of time to become one of the great czars of Russia - his obsession. I love your little fantasy - well written and your feelings are clear.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
    I hope my fantasy becomes fact! He wants Europe not just Ukraine. He isn't Hitler. Many nations are standing together to jail him as a war criminal. Thanks for reading Pam. K xx
Comment from mermaids
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Your words tell a tale of evil going down. I like the image of dolphins coming to the rescue. "Innocent souls freed at last" is a wonderful line. Excellent poem that is reflective of our times.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
    G'Day my friend and thank you for reading. The World has changed and we must change with it. That doesn't mean giving in to evil! love, Kay.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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The imagery here is chilling. The analogy is stunning. A sea of blood is maliciously created which eventually drowns the creator, as the world watches. There are millions of souls who will not morn the loss.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
    Hello little butterfly, Thank you for reading. It's a new world we are coping with. Jesus said, "you can be in the world but not of the world."
    Blessings, Kay xx
Comment from Susan Newell
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Aussie,

I like the imagery you have used to tie Putin to Satan and his boat floating on a sea of blood. It's particularly relevant given that the Italian's may have his yacht, paid for wih the blood of innocents. Very good poem.

Sue

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
    Brave new world? No, we have to adapt but we don't have to be like them. Putin will be cut down just like all the tall poppies. Thanks for reading. Blessings, Kay xx
Comment from Sanku
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I hope and pray this will happen .Justice should be done and he should repent. I pray for all the displaced souls. So many Indian students had to flee from there.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
    I believe we are in the Last Days. These happenings are forecast in the Bible and the time is now. Jesus will come. Thank you my friend. Love Kay. PS: how are your twin coconuts? Hee, Hee.
reply by Sanku on 28-Mar-2022
    ha ha nice one