Paradise Lost
7 word poem9 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
You got that right. Dreaming of paradise helps us cope with reality. Words to live by. In today's world our future is uncertain, so tapping into dreamland is something we all need to do.
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You got that right. Dreaming of paradise helps us cope with reality. Words to live by. In today's world our future is uncertain, so tapping into dreamland is something we all need to do.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The waterfall and its scenery are very creative. When you see paradise in your dream, this is an indication that you will define your goals. There is a possibility that you will set priorities for life after a long consideration. You will stick to those priorities, as you are aware things just don't fall from the sky straight into your lap. If you do fall into your lap; you will wake up to reality.
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The waterfall and its scenery are very creative. When you see paradise in your dream, this is an indication that you will define your goals. There is a possibility that you will set priorities for life after a long consideration. You will stick to those priorities, as you are aware things just don't fall from the sky straight into your lap. If you do fall into your lap; you will wake up to reality.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
Comment from in777wr#
This is a beautifully written poem. A lot was said in these seven words. Your poem reads and flows well. That beautiful picture compliments the poem. Nice job.
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This is a beautifully written poem. A lot was said in these seven words. Your poem reads and flows well. That beautiful picture compliments the poem. Nice job.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
Comment from Edna Kingsley
Breathtakingly beautiful artwork. My favorite thing in life is waterfalls, and at 47 I have yet to see one in person. As a matter of fact, I'm working on a poem about it.
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Breathtakingly beautiful artwork. My favorite thing in life is waterfalls, and at 47 I have yet to see one in person. As a matter of fact, I'm working on a poem about it.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
Comment from prettybluebirds
What beautiful artwork you attached to this writing. It is so hard to find much to say about these short-short poems so I will just have to say it is a good entry for the contest. I wish you all the luck in the world.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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What beautiful artwork you attached to this writing. It is so hard to find much to say about these short-short poems so I will just have to say it is a good entry for the contest. I wish you all the luck in the world.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from rspoet
This is and excellent entry for the contest of seven or less words.
Sometimes, dreams keep hope alive.
Good choice of art work.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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This is and excellent entry for the contest of seven or less words.
Sometimes, dreams keep hope alive.
Good choice of art work.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thanks very much for your review.
Comment from jessizero
You told a beautiful story in just seven words. That's amazing. I am sure you will do well in the competition. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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You told a beautiful story in just seven words. That's amazing. I am sure you will do well in the competition. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thanks very much for your review.
Comment from pa Banardi
I thought your poem was great with the words you chose to write.So true in every word ...Keep up the good work and I wish you well..real life poem good luck
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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I thought your poem was great with the words you chose to write.So true in every word ...Keep up the good work and I wish you well..real life poem good luck
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thanks very much for your review
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Imagination, dreaming and going for, viewing or thinking of for fantasy is man's habit, here the poet thinks of paradise in Nature before waking to reality; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Imagination, dreaming and going for, viewing or thinking of for fantasy is man's habit, here the poet thinks of paradise in Nature before waking to reality; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thanks for your review
