The Writings of a Mouse
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Greatest Love"Pieces of my Heart
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Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Ramona,
This is such a beautiful tribute to mothers everywhere. I can identify with it. I had a loving mother.
I love your beautiful sentiment here.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Ramona,
This is such a beautiful tribute to mothers everywhere. I can identify with it. I had a loving mother.
I love your beautiful sentiment here.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 20-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much Cindy.
Comment from Bridge
A lovely smile. It made me smile. I share a wonderful relation with my mum and also a wonderful relation with my 13 yr old son. Thanks for sharing.
With regards and best wishes
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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A lovely smile. It made me smile. I share a wonderful relation with my mum and also a wonderful relation with my 13 yr old son. Thanks for sharing.
With regards and best wishes
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much! I?m glad you enjoyed reading.
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Thank you so very much! I?m glad you enjoyed reading.
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
I think it's a great thing to love your child unconditionally. And you obviously do from what I've read here. But on the other side of the same token, I think you could have done it in a more creative form. Too much emotions can sometimes block your creativity. Keep Writing
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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I think it's a great thing to love your child unconditionally. And you obviously do from what I've read here. But on the other side of the same token, I think you could have done it in a more creative form. Too much emotions can sometimes block your creativity. Keep Writing
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thanks for the review it was a poem about my Mom. She makes me smile.
Comment from karenina
Your delight is contagious! My mom has been dead for thirty five years...taken too young, too soon. Bit she filled my heart with joyous memories that sustain me until we meet again!
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Your delight is contagious! My mom has been dead for thirty five years...taken too young, too soon. Bit she filled my heart with joyous memories that sustain me until we meet again!
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the review the nice review and for sharing! Mom?s are the best!
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Yes, they are..m
Always!
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Thank you so much! I bet she was wonderful!
Comment from Wendy G
I love this tribute to your mother - she sounds wonderful, a person filled with joy and happiness herself who delights to share that happiness with others. Best wishes for your beautiful entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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I love this tribute to your mother - she sounds wonderful, a person filled with joy and happiness herself who delights to share that happiness with others. Best wishes for your beautiful entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much Wendy. She?s a special lady indeed.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Greatest Love ', is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. I look forward to seeing your next post. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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'Greatest Love ', is an extremely well-written and heart-warming piece. I look forward to seeing your next post. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much for the encouragement Duchess! You are so very kind.
Ramona, you're very welcome.
Bless you and take care,
the Duchess :)))))
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What an awesome free verse contest entry in celebration of your mom, Ramona. I enjoyed reading it. Your words are descriptive of who, what, and how your mom lived and of your relationship with her.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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What an awesome free verse contest entry in celebration of your mom, Ramona. I enjoyed reading it. Your words are descriptive of who, what, and how your mom lived and of your relationship with her.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much Jan! She was so very special!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fine tribute to your Mother and it must be great to feel this way about your Mother and I hope my children feel this way about me, fine words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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This is a fine tribute to your Mother and it must be great to feel this way about your Mother and I hope my children feel this way about me, fine words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thanks Dolly! I?m sure they do! Thanks for the great review.
Comment from royowen
I'm pretty sure our kids think of my wife that way, she was/is their greatest, and now the next generation adore her as well, she is their sensitive, fun and devoted Nannie, they all love her, this is a beautiful reflection on you, well don, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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I'm pretty sure our kids think of my wife that way, she was/is their greatest, and now the next generation adore her as well, she is their sensitive, fun and devoted Nannie, they all love her, this is a beautiful reflection on you, well don, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much Roy. My Mom is the most exceptional woman I know.
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That is so wonderful Ramona
Comment from jessizero
This poem made me happy. I am very close to my mother, too. Thank you for writing this and for choosing to share it here. I also like the picture you selected to accompany this piece. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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This poem made me happy. I am very close to my mother, too. Thank you for writing this and for choosing to share it here. I also like the picture you selected to accompany this piece. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much! My Mom is my best friend!
