Snow In April
God's Will Can Often Hamper Our Sunny Expectations24 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
You did a good job with this poem. You never know what the weather is going to do, really. The picture you selected to accompany this piece is perfect here. Keep up the good work, and good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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You did a good job with this poem. You never know what the weather is going to do, really. The picture you selected to accompany this piece is perfect here. Keep up the good work, and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review and kind comments. I appreciate you.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Plaudits for your rhyming for this 2-4-6 contest. Yes, snow does fall in April and even on Mother's Day in my northeast neck of the woods. But, normally it disappears quickly. It is all in God's grand design for us.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Plaudits for your rhyming for this 2-4-6 contest. Yes, snow does fall in April and even on Mother's Day in my northeast neck of the woods. But, normally it disappears quickly. It is all in God's grand design for us.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Mark. I appreciate your thoughtful review and kind comments.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
Nice piece of poetry meeting all the desired norms!
You have beautifully depicted God's will.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Hello Friend,
Nice piece of poetry meeting all the desired norms!
You have beautifully depicted God's will.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your thoughtful comments and positive review.
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Hey Friend, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Snow In April ' , is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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' Snow In April ' , is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. With a minimum of words this talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much, Duchess! I appreciate your thoughtful comments and positive words of encouragement.
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Dear Anon, you're more than welcome.
Bless you and have a great week,
the Duchess
Comment from jake cosmos aller
like this short haiku like poem about an early Spring snowfall. I like the image you chose as well. I would not end it like that because well I am not a believer but to each their own.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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like this short haiku like poem about an early Spring snowfall. I like the image you chose as well. I would not end it like that because well I am not a believer but to each their own.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Jake. I appreciate your thoughtful review and kind comments.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry reads well, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. I like the end rhymes, the smooth flow, and the great art choice. Yes, even snow has its own beauty. You are right about God's will, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Your contest entry reads well, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. I like the end rhymes, the smooth flow, and the great art choice. Yes, even snow has its own beauty. You are right about God's will, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much, Jan. I appreciate your encouragement and thoughtful review.
Comment from Teri7
I love this 2-4-6 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I happen to love snow alot, but we don't get it very much where we live. I thank God for every day! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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I love this 2-4-6 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I happen to love snow alot, but we don't get it very much where we live. I thank God for every day! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much, Teri. I appreciate your thoughtful review and kind comments.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your poem. It is well constructed and timely. I was raised in Michigan and can remember a few snowfalls in April. It was a very bizarre feeling to know that is spring but I was looking at snow.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It is well constructed and timely. I was raised in Michigan and can remember a few snowfalls in April. It was a very bizarre feeling to know that is spring but I was looking at snow.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind comments. I appreciate your insight.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 2-4-6 poem for the contest that meets
the requirements with the three rhymes.
I'm waiting for spring like many others,
snow or no snow.
Nice picture to match.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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This is an excellent 2-4-6 poem for the contest that meets
the requirements with the three rhymes.
I'm waiting for spring like many others,
snow or no snow.
Nice picture to match.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Robert. I appreciate your supportive and kind comments.
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last
line says it all! I thought about God's will and how when it is not what
I want - I begin to wonder what his message is. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last
line says it all! I thought about God's will and how when it is not what
I want - I begin to wonder what his message is. The artwork is awesome and compliments these words.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful comments. My sentiments exactly.
