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Pray for Peace.......15 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I do too but quite honestly I feel we are at the end of the church age and the next waves of peace will be within The Rapture and The Millennial Rule of Jesus Christ. There can always be peace for those who seek it Christ, regardless of the times. Sending you my best today as always and blessings in our Lord Jesus Christ,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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I do too but quite honestly I feel we are at the end of the church age and the next waves of peace will be within The Rapture and The Millennial Rule of Jesus Christ. There can always be peace for those who seek it Christ, regardless of the times. Sending you my best today as always and blessings in our Lord Jesus Christ,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Hi Sally, thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments. I agree with your great feedback, Sally. Hope you and the
family are having a great weekend!....Maria
Comment from Moon baby
Hi there! This is a great 4 line poem and one that I can get behind! Aren't you glad you found Fan Story? I'm not retired, but I know for me that this has been a great platform for healing! I look forward to seeing more of your writing. Thanks for the good feeling of wanting peace!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Hi there! This is a great 4 line poem and one that I can get behind! Aren't you glad you found Fan Story? I'm not retired, but I know for me that this has been a great platform for healing! I look forward to seeing more of your writing. Thanks for the good feeling of wanting peace!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments.
And yest I am so glad I found Fanstory!
Hope you are having a great weekend!....Maria
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Harmony, your request for prayer is a worthwhile one. Lord knows that the only thing that is going to work is going to be prayer and the intervention of God for that country. I hope that He hurries up. Thanks for sharing this.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Hello Harmony, your request for prayer is a worthwhile one. Lord knows that the only thing that is going to work is going to be prayer and the intervention of God for that country. I hope that He hurries up. Thanks for sharing this.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Hi Tom, thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments. I agree with your words.
Hope you are having a great weekend!....Maria
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your art choice pairs perfectly with your well-chosen words, Harmony. Great job with the syllable count per line. I like the color scheme--very peaceful. My tiny suggestion is not to repeat the word peace.
I know your work, your choice.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Pray
God answers prayers
Let's all pray for peace [ Let's ask Him for help ]
I trust God will hear and grant us peace
[ I know He will hear and grant us peace ]
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Your art choice pairs perfectly with your well-chosen words, Harmony. Great job with the syllable count per line. I like the color scheme--very peaceful. My tiny suggestion is not to repeat the word peace.
I know your work, your choice.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Pray
God answers prayers
Let's all pray for peace [ Let's ask Him for help ]
I trust God will hear and grant us peace
[ I know He will hear and grant us peace ]
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Hi Jan, thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments. Thank you for the suggestion, I just couldn't find another word that fit well.
Hope you are having a great weekend!....Maria
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Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Maria. You did a great job in crafting this Four Line verse that answers the prompt beautifully. We all need to pray... especially for Ukraine...as they are battling so hard for their freedom. Well done.
Melissa
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Hello Maria. You did a great job in crafting this Four Line verse that answers the prompt beautifully. We all need to pray... especially for Ukraine...as they are battling so hard for their freedom. Well done.
Melissa
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Hi Melissa,thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments. Hope you are having a great weekend!....Maria
