Pray
Pray for Peace.......15 total reviews
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
My own personal feeling is that praying is not enough - we can't just ask God to do it and sit back and wait. We must pray and act, and pray that we act as He would have us.
You've written a nice poem of hope through prayer, and millions across the world are united in your hope. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
My own personal feeling is that praying is not enough - we can't just ask God to do it and sit back and wait. We must pray and act, and pray that we act as He would have us.
You've written a nice poem of hope through prayer, and millions across the world are united in your hope. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much, Pam, for the excellent review and interesting
and kind comments. I agree that we must pray then act and hopefully through prayer one can find the right action. Have a
good night!.....Maria
Comment from oliver818
I hope this can come true. The world would be so much better if it were peaceful. You sum that up very nicely here. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
I hope this can come true. The world would be so much better if it were peaceful. You sum that up very nicely here. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and you kind comments.
I am so glad you liked the poem. Have a good night!....Maria
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your four-liner is very timely and expressive. We always need to pray--but surely during times like these, when a bloodthirsty madman is slaughtering innocents. Note: I think "prayers" is one syllable.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
Your four-liner is very timely and expressive. We always need to pray--but surely during times like these, when a bloodthirsty madman is slaughtering innocents. Note: I think "prayers" is one syllable.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Hi Janice, thank you so much for the excellent review and your
excellent comments. Have a great weekend!....Maria
Comment from sunnilicious
Having a personal relationship with God is very important to our well being. Relatable poem as it was easy to understand. Great alliteration with G and P words. Nicely written. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
Having a personal relationship with God is very important to our well being. Relatable poem as it was easy to understand. Great alliteration with G and P words. Nicely written. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind comments.
Have a great weekend!....Maria
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am with you all the way here, peace would be a wonderful place to languish, a fine four line poem, I wish you luck with the contest, well chosen words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
I am with you all the way here, peace would be a wonderful place to languish, a fine four line poem, I wish you luck with the contest, well chosen words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Hi Dolly, thanks so much for the excellent review and your
great comments. Have a great weekend!...Maria
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You too Maria x x x
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, this is a well made poem for the contest. It will garner much attention from those who are God fearing and those wishing for peace. Not sure God answers prayers or is concerned about human wars but, It can't hurt.
Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
Hmm, this is a well made poem for the contest. It will garner much attention from those who are God fearing and those wishing for peace. Not sure God answers prayers or is concerned about human wars but, It can't hurt.
Well done.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great and
interesting comments. Have a great weekend!....Maria
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well crafted poem. We do need to pray for peace. Your poem expresses the sentiments of many of us. The picture you chose compliments this poem well. Nice job.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
This is a well crafted poem. We do need to pray for peace. Your poem expresses the sentiments of many of us. The picture you chose compliments this poem well. Nice job.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and wonderful comments. Have a great weekend!.....Maria
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You're welcome. Same to you.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a well written poem with a heartfelt sentiment. Your message is a strong one and long lasting. This topic is timely given what's going on in the Ukraine. Let's all pray for the innocent and helpless victims.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
This is a well written poem with a heartfelt sentiment. Your message is a strong one and long lasting. This topic is timely given what's going on in the Ukraine. Let's all pray for the innocent and helpless victims.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments.
Hope you are having a great weekend!....Maria
Comment from lauralumummu
I love this one I don't know if we can have world peace but Jesus said he would give us inner peace if we trust Him. I love the pic and your prayer that we all have especially now, God bless Laura
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
I love this one I don't know if we can have world peace but Jesus said he would give us inner peace if we trust Him. I love the pic and your prayer that we all have especially now, God bless Laura
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Hi Laura, thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments. Hope you are having a great weekend!....Maria
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Maria,
This is an excellent spiritual poem.
I like the way use use the word peace. First as peace in the world. Secondly, as 'inner peace.'
Great poem, Maria.
I hope you're at home in your new apartment.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
Maria,
This is an excellent spiritual poem.
I like the way use use the word peace. First as peace in the world. Secondly, as 'inner peace.'
Great poem, Maria.
I hope you're at home in your new apartment.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Hi Cindy, thank you so much for the excellent review and your kind comments. I liked what you said about the word peace!
Hope you are having a great weekend!....Maria