Earth's Magnificent Moon
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Earth's Moon"Poems, stories and fact about about our moon.
24 total reviews
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Masterfully crafted, Beth! No wonder it won the contest! You've got rhymes and the specifics of the abecedarian poetry all lined up here, with an air of mystery surrounding the beauty of our moon.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Masterfully crafted, Beth! No wonder it won the contest! You've got rhymes and the specifics of the abecedarian poetry all lined up here, with an air of mystery surrounding the beauty of our moon.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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Thank you so much Mary Kay. I'm suffering from and Intentional virus right now and I not feeling much like writing anything. I've had it nearly a week and I'm hoping I'll soon be better.
Beth
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You're very welcome, dear Beth. I often have intestinal problems too, and they can be very unpleasant. I hope you're feeling much better, by now.
I'm sorry I'm not around much. I'm just going through a very difficult time, along with my family members. Thank you so much for your prayers, and may God bless you, too.
Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from zanya
A job well done here with the moon as the topic in this Abecedarian poem- reminding the reader of the Moon's role, so to speak - and with a beautiful picture to illustrate
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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A job well done here with the moon as the topic in this Abecedarian poem- reminding the reader of the Moon's role, so to speak - and with a beautiful picture to illustrate
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you Zanya, I really appreciate the review and the lovely comments. I'm so pleased with the six stars.
Comment from Marienkiefer
Hello,
-Lovely poem on the cycles and position, and phases of moon affecting high and low moon; it's place in the cosmos.
-Respect of guidelines.
-What I appreciate most about this poem is the lines are flow naturally.
-Great imagery,b rhyming scheme.
-My favourite line: Beacon in the dark of night
-Very well done. Good luck on your entry.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Hello,
-Lovely poem on the cycles and position, and phases of moon affecting high and low moon; it's place in the cosmos.
-Respect of guidelines.
-What I appreciate most about this poem is the lines are flow naturally.
-Great imagery,b rhyming scheme.
-My favourite line: Beacon in the dark of night
-Very well done. Good luck on your entry.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for the the review and for the lovely comments I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for sharing your favorite line.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The moon, sun and star are beautiful creations of God. The Moon is Earth's only natural satellite. The Sun is the largest object in our solar system. Stars are born within the clouds of dust and scattered throughout most galaxies. The moon does sendoff signals of romance.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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The moon, sun and star are beautiful creations of God. The Moon is Earth's only natural satellite. The Sun is the largest object in our solar system. Stars are born within the clouds of dust and scattered throughout most galaxies. The moon does sendoff signals of romance.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you Rosemary. I appreciate your review of my poem. I very pleased that I actually won first in this contest. I wasn't expecting that. Beth
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Congratulations
Comment from Bill Schott
This Abecedarian poem, Earth's Moon, has twenty-six lines, follows the alphabet and reminds the readers of all the ideas and inspirations we have gleaned from simply observing it. Neat.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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This Abecedarian poem, Earth's Moon, has twenty-six lines, follows the alphabet and reminds the readers of all the ideas and inspirations we have gleaned from simply observing it. Neat.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you Bill, I appreciate the review and nice commetns.
Comment from MissMerri
This is exceptional and should earn sixes... if only we had some left. I know how difficult it is to write one of these Abecedarians, and I think the best thing about this poem is that it tells a story about the moon and is at the same time, educational. I'm pretty sure this will win the contest and in my opinion, it truly deserves to. It is the best one I've read. I admire your skill in making it flow so nicely and saying all the right things at the same time. Excellent entry in this contest!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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This is exceptional and should earn sixes... if only we had some left. I know how difficult it is to write one of these Abecedarians, and I think the best thing about this poem is that it tells a story about the moon and is at the same time, educational. I'm pretty sure this will win the contest and in my opinion, it truly deserves to. It is the best one I've read. I admire your skill in making it flow so nicely and saying all the right things at the same time. Excellent entry in this contest!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for the review and really enjoyed reading you comments. I'm so glad you like it.
Comment from Rena Smith
I think the poet did an awesome job writing this poem about the moon. I love the choice of words and the guidelines were met. I'm a moon gazer and this was the very first one I read in this contest and when I read it I just fell in love with it. It's informative about the moon. I like it because it's about the moon.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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I think the poet did an awesome job writing this poem about the moon. I love the choice of words and the guidelines were met. I'm a moon gazer and this was the very first one I read in this contest and when I read it I just fell in love with it. It's informative about the moon. I like it because it's about the moon.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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I'm so glad you like this poem. I'm really enjoyed your comments and I appreciate your six stars.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Abecedarian poem writing prompt contest. You followed the contest and form rules well. Beautiful presentation and imagery.
I like the moon theme.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Excellent entry for the Abecedarian poem writing prompt contest. You followed the contest and form rules well. Beautiful presentation and imagery.
I like the moon theme.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much Rose. I'm so glad you liked my poem. I enjoyed reading your comments.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
That is quite the chronology of the lunar cycle. Very well done. It should be one of the few to be favored when the tally ends. Good luck. .....................................
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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That is quite the chronology of the lunar cycle. Very well done. It should be one of the few to be favored when the tally ends. Good luck. .....................................
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you Tom. I really appreciate the review and nice comments and good wishes.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Love your poem. It paints a beautiful picture in every aspect of this Abecedarian Poem. It read smoothly and had a nice flow to it. Good luck in the contest, and have a great Saturday. Shirley
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Love your poem. It paints a beautiful picture in every aspect of this Abecedarian Poem. It read smoothly and had a nice flow to it. Good luck in the contest, and have a great Saturday. Shirley
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you Shirley, I really appreciate your review and comments. I'm so glad you like my poem.
