Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Excellent

Author,
You're 3-5-3 poem is full of passion.
The photo fits well.
I learned a new word from your poem: quaintrelle.) (I've never been accused of being one. Lol)

This kind of poem is so difficult to write because one needs to say so much, using only eleven syllables.
You've used your syllables very well.
Best wishes,
Cindy

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022

Thank you for the fantastic review, Cindy. Yes, it's hard to say anything worthwhile in such few words, that's for sure. So I figured I'd clutter it up with words no one knows. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars, C. I'm glad you liked the piece.

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

What a great word you found here, quaintrelle. I've never head it before and I honestly thought it was a type of poem at first. Eylsian is also a lovely choice of word. The whole poem just works really well to create a very evocative image. Thanks for sharing this and best of luck with the competition.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022

Thank you for the fantastic review, Oliver. I really appreciate the kind comments and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have yourself a great day.

Comment from in777wr#

Good

This is a very nice poem. Your notes helped me understand the message in this poem. Your poem flowed beautifully. The picture accentuated the poem well. Nice job.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022

Thanks. I'm glad you liked the piece.

reply by in777wr# on 23-Mar-2022

You are welcome