The Angel Dance
A Children's Poem9 total reviews
Comment from Marienkiefer
Hello,
This is such a beautiful piece!
-Magical, colourful, whimsical.
-Natural flow of words, not contrived.
-Respect of guidelines
-You communicate peaceful joy and an aura of festivity with the colours you showcase, scenic props: light, sound engineering, sets the musical scene: harp, xylophone,
Party fares and crockery,nrefreshments.
-Well mounted and animated scenes in your poem.
-Excellent. Have a nice evening.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Hello,
This is such a beautiful piece!
-Magical, colourful, whimsical.
-Natural flow of words, not contrived.
-Respect of guidelines
-You communicate peaceful joy and an aura of festivity with the colours you showcase, scenic props: light, sound engineering, sets the musical scene: harp, xylophone,
Party fares and crockery,nrefreshments.
-Well mounted and animated scenes in your poem.
-Excellent. Have a nice evening.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful review and your kind words...both are very appreciated. :)
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You?re very welcome.
Once again, a very delightful read!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The poems that have the complete alphabet, is a fun poem to write and read. There is something about an angel that perhaps bring delight to heaven and earth. Like your poem.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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The poems that have the complete alphabet, is a fun poem to write and read. There is something about an angel that perhaps bring delight to heaven and earth. Like your poem.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much for this great review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Abecedarian poem writing prompt contest. You followed the contest and form rules well. Beautiful presentation and imagery.
I like the angels theme.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Excellent entry for the Abecedarian poem writing prompt contest. You followed the contest and form rules well. Beautiful presentation and imagery.
I like the angels theme.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much for this nice review, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a pretty idea of angels holding a dance. I suspect children might prefer they be fairies as that is what the picture seems to show. You did a good job of finding words to fit the alphabet. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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This is a pretty idea of angels holding a dance. I suspect children might prefer they be fairies as that is what the picture seems to show. You did a good job of finding words to fit the alphabet. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you for this nice review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is a beautiful poem you have written for the alphabet contest. I believe people of all ages will enjoy this piece! I hope the angels had the dance they always dreamed of! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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This is a beautiful poem you have written for the alphabet contest. I believe people of all ages will enjoy this piece! I hope the angels had the dance they always dreamed of! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Thank you for this angelic review...it's so great. :)
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author,
This is a really difficult poem convention, ( abecedarian) but you've written it with a soft deftness.
Your images transcend the earthly, and no matter what one believes, this could be a tantalizing view of the beauty of the forever yet to come.
Fantastic, author! Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Author,
This is a really difficult poem convention, ( abecedarian) but you've written it with a soft deftness.
Your images transcend the earthly, and no matter what one believes, this could be a tantalizing view of the beauty of the forever yet to come.
Fantastic, author! Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for this thoughtful review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your Abecedarian Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your Abecedarian Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you for this great review, as always I'm so happy you took the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from prettybluebirds
I like this poem better than the others written in the same vein. This is the first one I read that carried the story all the way through to the end. The others were kind of meaningless. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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I like this poem better than the others written in the same vein. This is the first one I read that carried the story all the way through to the end. The others were kind of meaningless. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Thank you for such a nice review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Nur-e-Ilm
I love the ethereal nature of this poem! The lines blend into each other very well; there is no delay or jerkiness between the letters. I hope the angels had fun :)
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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I love the ethereal nature of this poem! The lines blend into each other very well; there is no delay or jerkiness between the letters. I hope the angels had fun :)
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Of course they had tons of fun. Thank you for this great review. :)
