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I'm ready ...10 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Congratulations on placing in the contest. Your superpowers choice shows creative compassion in action.
On behalf of my community I'd like to invite you to Dunedin. We need a cardiac surgeon and a neurosurgeon at our hospital, so if you come we'll solve the shortage straight away - I see you are ready to get started and have good strategies with prevention and restoration.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Congratulations on placing in the contest. Your superpowers choice shows creative compassion in action.
On behalf of my community I'd like to invite you to Dunedin. We need a cardiac surgeon and a neurosurgeon at our hospital, so if you come we'll solve the shortage straight away - I see you are ready to get started and have good strategies with prevention and restoration.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Lol Thanks for a super review and your congratulations. Super powers? First time for this kind of writing, not my usual at all. I had better not come anywhere near your hospital. My medical skills are limited to aspirin and bandaids!!
Wendy
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Darn... we are having trouble attracting surgeons.
I think belonging to FanStory and going in contests is a great way to broaden writing skills and topics tackled.
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Yours is a beautiful area - if I was a surgeon I'd be delighted to live in Dunedin!
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I certainly enjoy living here.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I love this short story. You did a nice job with the prompt, very creative. The use of colored text is effective. I wonder why you chose these particular super powers over others . Your writing drew me in immediately and kept me until the end. The illustration works perfectly.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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I love this short story. You did a nice job with the prompt, very creative. The use of colored text is effective. I wonder why you chose these particular super powers over others . Your writing drew me in immediately and kept me until the end. The illustration works perfectly.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much for your super review.I guess it's just wishful thinking and unrealistic - but I thought those super powers would fix most of what is wrong with our poor world.
Wendy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Super Powers writing prompt contest. You have my vote. The story flows well and it's engaging.
The idea is interesting. It would be great if we had that kind of super power. Your ide is very zen, I like it.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Excellent entry for the Super Powers writing prompt contest. You have my vote. The story flows well and it's engaging.
The idea is interesting. It would be great if we had that kind of super power. Your ide is very zen, I like it.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much! I appreciate your super review. If only I could!
Wendy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This would be wonderful if this remedy could heal the negative thoughts and uncontrollable desires. It is too easy to dislike instead of like everything around us. Like your story.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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This would be wonderful if this remedy could heal the negative thoughts and uncontrollable desires. It is too easy to dislike instead of like everything around us. Like your story.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Thank you Rosemary! A very encouraging review. Yes, if only ....
Comment from in777wr#
This is a pretty good story. We so need what you wrote in your story. Your writing flowed well. The picture you chose compliments this story well. The transformation of heart and mind is good. Nice job.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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This is a pretty good story. We so need what you wrote in your story. Your writing flowed well. The picture you chose compliments this story well. The transformation of heart and mind is good. Nice job.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much. I appreciate your thoughtful review and encouragement.
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You're welcome.
Comment from jessizero
That's quite a plan for your superpowers! You could quite literally save the world should this actually come true. Thank you for sharing this here. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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That's quite a plan for your superpowers! You could quite literally save the world should this actually come true. Thank you for sharing this here. Best wishes.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for reviewing. Appreciated. Wish it could be true!
Comment from tfawcus
You've come up with a fine, Utopian use for your newly acquired superpowers, and not a moment too soon, by all accounts. There is a great need for a change of heart in these bleak times.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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You've come up with a fine, Utopian use for your newly acquired superpowers, and not a moment too soon, by all accounts. There is a great need for a change of heart in these bleak times.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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I would definitely need SUPER super powers! Wishful thinking - I'm a bit fed up with mankind's unkind and hurtful actions at present. Many thanks for your kind review, always appreciated.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Nifty picture. I so much wish your superpower would work as you say. It's a well-written story with a great idea, but I don't think you could do enough surgeries to save the world.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Nifty picture. I so much wish your superpower would work as you say. It's a well-written story with a great idea, but I don't think you could do enough surgeries to save the world.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Ah yes, you are right! I would need SUPER super powers! Wishful thinking - I'm a bit fed up with mankind's unkind and hurtful actions. Many thanks for your kind review, always appreciated.
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I used to think at least the Northern Hemisphere was firmly into the 21st century, but then Russia went mad.
Comment from lancellot
Well, now that is something. It reminds me of a scene from The Lord of the Rings, the first movie, when Frodo offered Galadriel the one ring. If you've seen it, then you know what I mean.
Well written and I'm sure many will love the positivity.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Well, now that is something. It reminds me of a scene from The Lord of the Rings, the first movie, when Frodo offered Galadriel the one ring. If you've seen it, then you know what I mean.
Well written and I'm sure many will love the positivity.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much! Great review. I confess to not having seen it, as super powers and such are not normally my "thing". A spontaneous write, spur of the moment. Guess I'm sick of all the unnecessary suffering in the world because we don't act like we should.
Comment from kahpot
Exceptional, so selfless, this read reminds me of the Superman/Supergirl programs I watched years ago, using their powers to help others, though your goes a bit further with the mind thing-but hey who knows your superpowers are yours, very well written an excellent read, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Exceptional, so selfless, this read reminds me of the Superman/Supergirl programs I watched years ago, using their powers to help others, though your goes a bit further with the mind thing-but hey who knows your superpowers are yours, very well written an excellent read, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much Kahpot! Mine would indeed have to be super super powers. I appreciate your lovely review, and also the honour of six stars! Greatly valued indeed.
