Comment from Lisa V

Good

I really like the poem and the words you selected. I wasn't quite sure about the picture that was selected. The eagle certainly shows "freedom" but wasn't sure about the other animals in the photo. Otherwise very nice.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022

I'm totally blind, and I thought the photo was of an eagle flying. I guess it's not?
As for the rating, could you please tell me what I could do to improve the poem? My goal here on fan story is to become a better writer. thank you so much for reading, and thank you in advance if you decide to comment further. Hugs.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

Hope is the root of progress? I never thought of it that way, but it makes a lot of sense! Thank you for sharing this message here. Best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022

Here is my thought process? Lol

When we hope for something, we really want it to happen.
Unless we want something to happen, we don't move forward, or make progress.
And when we dream, we form ideas that we hope for.

Thank you so much for your review and comments. Hugs.