Through Her Tears
Love is not blind...16 total reviews
Comment from Esther Brown
Short and sweet. Liked this. Seems like you can do both long novel and very short nibbles at stories on a wide range of subjects. You deserved this and congradulations. Esther
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Short and sweet. Liked this. Seems like you can do both long novel and very short nibbles at stories on a wide range of subjects. You deserved this and congradulations. Esther
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Oh my, you went way back in my portfolio to find this one. I use to do shorts all the time and somehow got caught up in the lives of my characters and they became the books instead.
Thanks for reading.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lancellot
This is nicely written and on the surface it seems like the mistress got the last word. On the surface, that is. Good job of making it seem okay, by making the wife appear as a bad person. That will turn those who dislike cheating around. They like justifications.
Nice work.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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This is nicely written and on the surface it seems like the mistress got the last word. On the surface, that is. Good job of making it seem okay, by making the wife appear as a bad person. That will turn those who dislike cheating around. They like justifications.
Nice work.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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I've been told I've been walking on the dark side of late so I guess that's why I gave the mistress the benefit in this particular case. Though I doubt either of them were without blame, it seems as if she gave more happiness in return. Thanks for the review and thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
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Hey, the dark side can be fun too. ;)
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I agree!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I almost sent you a message a few times but didn't want to catch you at a busy time. Then, I just stumbled across this post, wondering why I hadn't been notified. But realized it was a contest, so they don't sent them to my box. I hope all is well in your world! Ric
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Well, I almost sent you a message a few times but didn't want to catch you at a busy time. Then, I just stumbled across this post, wondering why I hadn't been notified. But realized it was a contest, so they don't sent them to my box. I hope all is well in your world! Ric
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Hi...Thank you for thinking about me. The two posts I have written were both blind, but I can't seem to get it together lately. Maybe it's the dreary weather or maybe it's just me, but it's been a struggle. I am silently yelling at myself but that's not working too well either. LOL I appreciate beyond words knowing you thought of me.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Thatguypk
What a delightfully cruel twist of fate. :-) Very amusing piece of writing. It tells a whole story of love, deceit, corruption, irony, all in so few words. Very clever.
PK
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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What a delightfully cruel twist of fate. :-) Very amusing piece of writing. It tells a whole story of love, deceit, corruption, irony, all in so few words. Very clever.
PK
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your thoughts and kindness. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Great entry for the Very short story writing prompt contest. You captured my attention right away and held it all the way through. The twist at the end was funny. Poor widow. it's surprising in a good way.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Great entry for the Very short story writing prompt contest. You captured my attention right away and held it all the way through. The twist at the end was funny. Poor widow. it's surprising in a good way.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Youch! I guess she told you, huh?! Some wives think like this - that it's all about the money. But there's a lot more to relationships than what you can GET out of them. *smile* I liked the ending. Thanks!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Youch! I guess she told you, huh?! Some wives think like this - that it's all about the money. But there's a lot more to relationships than what you can GET out of them. *smile* I liked the ending. Thanks!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery writer a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked very short story writing prompt entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Hello mystery writer a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked very short story writing prompt entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day!
Comment from wilkswrites
Alright now!
This one was a very good read with an unexpected ending. I want to say it was "witty" but mostly it was unexpected which makes for a very powerful ending. Good job and best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Alright now!
This one was a very good read with an unexpected ending. I want to say it was "witty" but mostly it was unexpected which makes for a very powerful ending. Good job and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Wow! How unexpected but greatly appreciated. Your kindness and thoughts on my writing blesses me. Have a great day!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Mandy is a very smart woman. The wife doesn't sound like she was much fun. The lawyer would have a way to be sure she won in an uncontested will. This is a very neat story; may the best woman win.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Mandy is a very smart woman. The wife doesn't sound like she was much fun. The lawyer would have a way to be sure she won in an uncontested will. This is a very neat story; may the best woman win.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
There sure is a twist in this story. Evidently, the fellow has two women that were fighting over him. I wonder what the miser of a woman thought, when the other woman said she was his lawyer.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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There sure is a twist in this story. Evidently, the fellow has two women that were fighting over him. I wonder what the miser of a woman thought, when the other woman said she was his lawyer.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day!
