Terms Of Endearment
This short review describes the movie Terms Of Endearment.3 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-The syllable count is good, along with the movie choice.
-You wrote a good poem that gives the basic idea of the movie.
-You have a good progression of the plot from the basic idea
to the issues the family encountered, like infidelity and cancer.
-A very good concluding verse that sums up the overall nature of this family.
-One small thing: incredibly gives you 7 syllables; very would give you 5.
-A very good movie choice and great job with the poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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-The syllable count is good, along with the movie choice.
-You wrote a good poem that gives the basic idea of the movie.
-You have a good progression of the plot from the basic idea
to the issues the family encountered, like infidelity and cancer.
-A very good concluding verse that sums up the overall nature of this family.
-One small thing: incredibly gives you 7 syllables; very would give you 5.
-A very good movie choice and great job with the poem.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much Pam. I totally misunderstood the instructions. I am working on the next verses. Would love it if you could take a look.
Thanks again
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You are very welcome. The idea of 'stacked' should have been explained in the contest rules. You did a great job. You have a new rating and review.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Huh, a movie review in a poem. Wouldn't it be fun if critics reviewed the movies they see this way? I'm wondering if you wrote that while watching the movie, lol?
You nailed the requirement for this prompt while telling us what the movie is about.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Huh, a movie review in a poem. Wouldn't it be fun if critics reviewed the movies they see this way? I'm wondering if you wrote that while watching the movie, lol?
You nailed the requirement for this prompt while telling us what the movie is about.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Yes, this was an unusual assignment. It would be kind of fun if critics put their review s into poetic form. Glad you liked it
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 movie critique.
I'm not sure if I have seen the movie but this entry for the prompt contest gives me an idea that it has a happy ending after a hard period in ordinary folks life. Nicely done and best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 movie critique.
I'm not sure if I have seen the movie but this entry for the prompt contest gives me an idea that it has a happy ending after a hard period in ordinary folks life. Nicely done and best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much. It's a wonderful movie. I hope you will see it but make sure you have some Kleenex handy.
