Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "~ My Beloved ~"Romantic Tanka Poems
14 total reviews
Comment from royowen
A beautifully composed poem my friend, an excellent post. The post is beautifully consumed with all the things that passion entails, extreme emotion almost controlling the person, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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A beautifully composed poem my friend, an excellent post. The post is beautifully consumed with all the things that passion entails, extreme emotion almost controlling the person, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, Roy. I really appreciate your exceptional review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Thank you very much, Roy. I really appreciate your exceptional review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written love poem. Very beautiful overall presentation as well. Beautiful photo's to compliment your words. A fine club entry.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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This is a beautifully written love poem. Very beautiful overall presentation as well. Beautiful photo's to compliment your words. A fine club entry.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, Joanne. I really appreciate your exceptional review, six stars, and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Thank you very much, Joanne. I really appreciate your exceptional review, six stars, and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your poem. The artwork is lovely and adds to your beautiful writing. The color story adds to the descriptive words you chose. The emotion felt by you comes through very clearly,
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem. The artwork is lovely and adds to your beautiful writing. The color story adds to the descriptive words you chose. The emotion felt by you comes through very clearly,
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Versch
When a loved one is lost, it always leaves overwhelming pain in someone's heart and life seems to stand still, not worth living anymore. I had felt when I lost a loved one. Best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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When a loved one is lost, it always leaves overwhelming pain in someone's heart and life seems to stand still, not worth living anymore. I had felt when I lost a loved one. Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark Schardine
The thought of a loved gone to fight in a war will lead to great sorrow, and no one can know if there will be a reunion.
Of course, this poem can also refer to to a relationship so troubled that can only lead to pointless disputes.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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The thought of a loved gone to fight in a war will lead to great sorrow, and no one can know if there will be a reunion.
Of course, this poem can also refer to to a relationship so troubled that can only lead to pointless disputes.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A very sad and touching poem. It is so timely now when you see the pictures of a woman on the train saying goodbye to her husband as she leaves for Poland and he stays in Ukraine.
Beautifully written.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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A very sad and touching poem. It is so timely now when you see the pictures of a woman on the train saying goodbye to her husband as she leaves for Poland and he stays in Ukraine.
Beautifully written.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, Mary. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Blessed be
Comment from aryr
This was a great Somonka Poem, Gypsy. If I read your notes properly it involves a romantic situation among two people, whether lovers, siblings, etc. This was beautiful because it was a couple responding to each other. I loved your words and loved the picture. Blessed be.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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This was a great Somonka Poem, Gypsy. If I read your notes properly it involves a romantic situation among two people, whether lovers, siblings, etc. This was beautiful because it was a couple responding to each other. I loved your words and loved the picture. Blessed be.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much aryr :) I appreciate your exceptional review and kind words.
Blessed be
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy--and one I'm sure many, many people in Ukraine are experiencing right now, and for what? So a madman can prove he had sound judgement, that he didn't make a terrible decision?
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy--and one I'm sure many, many people in Ukraine are experiencing right now, and for what? So a madman can prove he had sound judgement, that he didn't make a terrible decision?
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and feedback.
Blessed be
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem - the picture goes with the story nicely - subject looking outward longingly waiting for his return looking at the fog. Seems to be telling a story of a lover off to war - but interestingly it is a dimension of love itself on a different level - the love and then the absence, the yen and the yang , the having and then the loss that gives it vibrancy - imagine embracing forever or never coming back? Yes? The fire of expectation. The breathing in and the breathing out of love. Not sadness. Good job.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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I like your poem - the picture goes with the story nicely - subject looking outward longingly waiting for his return looking at the fog. Seems to be telling a story of a lover off to war - but interestingly it is a dimension of love itself on a different level - the love and then the absence, the yen and the yang , the having and then the loss that gives it vibrancy - imagine embracing forever or never coming back? Yes? The fire of expectation. The breathing in and the breathing out of love. Not sadness. Good job.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and feedback.
Blessed be
Comment from oliver818
This is a very nice, if very sad and touching poem. I like the style and the way it flows. Thanks he imagery is very evocative and brings the piece to life. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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This is a very nice, if very sad and touching poem. I like the style and the way it flows. Thanks he imagery is very evocative and brings the piece to life. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and feedback.
Blessed be