Fatal Attraction
Stuck On Stupid4 total reviews
Comment from writer723
I enjoyed reading this suspenseful tale. Things go south when one lover turns into a basket case. You did a really great job highlighting the situation and the tense, hair-raising moments when one deals with an obsessed stalker. Nice job!
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I enjoyed reading this suspenseful tale. Things go south when one lover turns into a basket case. You did a really great job highlighting the situation and the tense, hair-raising moments when one deals with an obsessed stalker. Nice job!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
Comment from Ricky1024
"Fatal Attraction"
This is a Fatal Attraction writing prompt entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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First I'd like the way you set it up to make him look sugar sweet but then you start to rip them up as he start turning into a thief and abuser and then eventual heroin addict!
When I was married my wife Carolyn's first husband was her and addict so I know exactly how that works.
Good luck with this one.
Well deserved 6stars******
Doctor Ricky 1024
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"Fatal Attraction"
This is a Fatal Attraction writing prompt entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
First I'd like the way you set it up to make him look sugar sweet but then you start to rip them up as he start turning into a thief and abuser and then eventual heroin addict!
When I was married my wife Carolyn's first husband was her and addict so I know exactly how that works.
Good luck with this one.
Well deserved 6stars******
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
Comment from Ramona Scarborough
So many women can relate to your story if they have had a relationship with a controller. Been there, all done with that. Some people don't want to be warned. I tried when my ex was going to remarry.
You wrote this well, I wish you success with the contest.
Ramona
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So many women can relate to your story if they have had a relationship with a controller. Been there, all done with that. Some people don't want to be warned. I tried when my ex was going to remarry.
You wrote this well, I wish you success with the contest.
Ramona
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
Comment from victor 66
Talk about "Love going wrong". This story seems awful real and detailed for it to be fiction. I'm not suggesting this is not fiction, but it's awfully good and should be a warning for anyone who gets involved with someone who seems too good to be true. Good luck in the contest.
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Talk about "Love going wrong". This story seems awful real and detailed for it to be fiction. I'm not suggesting this is not fiction, but it's awfully good and should be a warning for anyone who gets involved with someone who seems too good to be true. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
