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Our mission to live a good and worthy life.3 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Congratulations on your win with this poem.
The journey is different for everyone; your poem asks the unknown - Was it all worth it? The line that stands out for me, as one who tries to love and be kind, is the hope: "We can rest assured."
I find it odd with readers and contests that they are willing to read a work, perhaps vote for it, but unwilling to leave a review. Your lovely poem deserves far more reviews than it has had, and I see that 80 people have read it. Probably proving they just want monetary reward. Shallow.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
Congratulations on your win with this poem.
The journey is different for everyone; your poem asks the unknown - Was it all worth it? The line that stands out for me, as one who tries to love and be kind, is the hope: "We can rest assured."
I find it odd with readers and contests that they are willing to read a work, perhaps vote for it, but unwilling to leave a review. Your lovely poem deserves far more reviews than it has had, and I see that 80 people have read it. Probably proving they just want monetary reward. Shallow.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you, LisaMay, I always find your feedback helpful and encouraging. Appreciate the time and effort you devote to giving meaningful comments. I also wish more people would take the time to voice their opinions.
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Thanks for your nice comments.
Comment from jessizero
I like your poem. You painted a lovely picture with your words. I don't necessarily agree, but that's not the point. Thank you for choosing to share this here. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
I like your poem. You painted a lovely picture with your words. I don't necessarily agree, but that's not the point. Thank you for choosing to share this here. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your honest assessment. Many, it seems, would let their own beliefs rule their judgement. Your opinion much appreciated.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Beautifully done! It is comforting to imagine an eternal life. We must all live a peaceful and giving existence to find out what might be in store for our souls.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
Beautifully done! It is comforting to imagine an eternal life. We must all live a peaceful and giving existence to find out what might be in store for our souls.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Much appreciated.