Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet, you now have 7 votes!

I like the choice of opposites.

The picture is beautiful.. in Summer I have often sat and watch the transition from twilight to dusk ..

I found your description
delightful to the ear.

Ciao!

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022

Thanks so much.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I liked this piece. You chosen first and last lines are unexpected and you create some lovely imagery with that which comes in between.

Soft is a god companion for linger as last is for depart.

Very nice indeed.
GMG

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022

Thank you Gareth!

Comment from Cass Carlton

Excellent

I like this. The words chosen "linger" and "depart" are beautiful, poetic words full of meaning and nuance. The artwork is well chosen with a figure sitting in silhouette in the darkening of day as twilight softly encroaches.
The words of the poem are romantic and tender, making a lovely piece that echoes like a love song in my ears. cheers Cass

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022

Thanks so much!