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Floods

A rhyming acrostic poem

3 total reviews 
Comment from Jessie Eldora
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Thank you for commenting on my Verse, My Boy. I read this piece first, as we have had flooding here in British Columbia, and now there are new areas flooding. And, it is "right on!" Love the artwork. - Jessie

 Comment Written 17-May-2022


reply by the author on 17-May-2022
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated.
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Comment from lyenochka
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Great job with your rhyming acrostic poem which is so dramatic. I liked the personification of "furious waters" and the repetition of "overflowing." It's too bad that we don't get enough news about the flooding crisis because of the war. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is really much appreciated.
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Comment from kahpot
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Excellent Acrostic, I was expecting the last line to maybe have started with "scared" yes the floods are furious, we are experiencing some here in QLD. very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is really much appreciated.
    With regards