Floods
A rhyming acrostic poem3 total reviews
Comment from Jessie Eldora
Thank you for commenting on my Verse, My Boy. I read this piece first, as we have had flooding here in British Columbia, and now there are new areas flooding. And, it is "right on!" Love the artwork. - Jessie
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Thank you for commenting on my Verse, My Boy. I read this piece first, as we have had flooding here in British Columbia, and now there are new areas flooding. And, it is "right on!" Love the artwork. - Jessie
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated.
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Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your rhyming acrostic poem which is so dramatic. I liked the personification of "furious waters" and the repetition of "overflowing." It's too bad that we don't get enough news about the flooding crisis because of the war. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Great job with your rhyming acrostic poem which is so dramatic. I liked the personification of "furious waters" and the repetition of "overflowing." It's too bad that we don't get enough news about the flooding crisis because of the war. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is really much appreciated.
With regards
Comment from kahpot
Excellent Acrostic, I was expecting the last line to maybe have started with "scared" yes the floods are furious, we are experiencing some here in QLD. very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Excellent Acrostic, I was expecting the last line to maybe have started with "scared" yes the floods are furious, we are experiencing some here in QLD. very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is really much appreciated.
With regards