Breeze
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, very good. Well done, well said. Good syllable count.
What I like most about your poem is that it actually sounds poetic
vs. a sentence, and that's a hard feat with only eight syllables to
work with. Well chosen artwork. As this is a contest entry, I wish
you good luck. LateBloomer
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Hello author, very good. Well done, well said. Good syllable count.
What I like most about your poem is that it actually sounds poetic
vs. a sentence, and that's a hard feat with only eight syllables to
work with. Well chosen artwork. As this is a contest entry, I wish
you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
Comment from pa Banardi
I loved the picture and the poem. I love a solf breeze in the air. you could almost feel the breeze upon your face. Very good! Keep up you're writing I truly though it was just like spring.
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I loved the picture and the poem. I love a solf breeze in the air. you could almost feel the breeze upon your face. Very good! Keep up you're writing I truly though it was just like spring.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
