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18 Word 1 Sentence Non-Fiction Contest

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Comment from Terry Broxson
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I give you five stars because it is a pretty good message. But I think this contest, with a lot of hoops to jump through, the first hoop is nonfiction. Maybe there is Dr. Daniel Ray who did win and then rejects the Nobel Prize for literature in 2022, but I don't think so. So, I think this is fiction.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022

Comment from Aubree Lorraine
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I like what you've done here. The challenge requires a lot of thought to come up with something meaningful and coherent, and you've done that. I like the picture you've chosen as well. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022

Comment from RGstar
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Well, once again, I am sure the Nobel Prize will not be announced until October for 2022, and as I know, only one man ever turned down that prize...a Vietnamese, so I am unsure if this is supposed to be fiction...as the competition quotes non-fiction.

Still, it is a strong point.
My best wishes.
RGstar







 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022

Comment from robyn corum
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Dear Mystery Writer,

Wow. I have to think he turned it down due to some noble purpose - to stand for something - but your post doesn't leave enough room to add all that extra information. Good work. Thanks!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022

Comment from John Ciarmello
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This is a well written piece. You have executed all the elements set forth in the guidelines. The contest coveys a clear challenge that of which you have talentedly mastered. I wish you much success with the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022

Comment from Raul1
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022

Comment from jessizero
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You did a great job with the prompt and requirements. Congratulations on fulfilling all of the guidelines. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022

Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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Love this 1 sentence poem. It takes talent to be able to successfully tell a complete story using only 18 words. Well done! Your use of colored text and the choice of red is effective.

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 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022