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Feckless Men

War and Hate

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Comment from scongrove
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This really tugged at my heartstrings. I can't imagine all the things that go on in other countries. Americans have no idea. I know I do not because I'm so sheltered here.
War between different clans is a terrible thing, especially when the children have no choice but to endure and suffer. I'm sure you've seen things that most do not, my friend.

Thanks for sharing, my dear friend.
Always your fan,
Shana :)

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Yes, we tend believe what we hear Shana, people are lovely wherever one goes.
Comment from mrsmajor
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Thank you so very much for this thoughtful poem, Roy, indeed our loving God, loves all of us...,He gave His only begotten Son, Jesus Christ, to save our souls, we should all be thankful for a chance at everlasting life...The verses you mention are very familiar to me...I've not been anywhere in Europe, but I have been to many of the Caribbean islands, and the only way one can ever know another people is to live/visit with them...Before my Richard left us in final sleep, we had purchased a plot of land in the Bahamas, it was our intension to have a place to visit, for long periods of time.
No matter how much people read, about other places, there's nothing like being there...
I do so appreciate your well written rhymed quatrain verses, and thanks again for sharing your thoughts with us...Yes Christ did say, forgive them, for they know not what they do...that can also go for the horror we are seeing in Ukraine right now...the difference is, that, those creating the horror for millions of people, over there, know exactly what they are doing...Thanks again...
Blessings,

Warmly,
Victoria

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thank you Victoria for these precious words and most empathetic review, blessings Roy
reply by mrsmajor on 19-Mar-2022
    Always a pleasure my friend.....
Comment from strandregs
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Love your epic with coherent narrative and lovely rhymes.
If only leaders brains weren't made of coleflower and their skulls made of coconut
But, then, that's why they become leaders.
Possessed is the only explanation. :-))Z.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thanks so much for these excellent comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello Roy a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. It comes as no surprise that you have delivered a beautifully composed and worded piece of poetry that exhibits your skills and faith. Great job as always.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thanks so much for these gracious comments and a wonderful review, blessings Roy
Comment from RGstar
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War and hate, Power and ego, has no description, because however much we describe, it never meets the magnitude of the sorrow it inflicts.
Such sadness in the world...and it seems we are not ready to learn.
My best wishes.
RG

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thanks so much RG, for these gracious comments and a wonderful review, blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
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Yes He offered free forgiveness, for those who were willing to repent and receive it. What I see today is that mankind refuses to forgive others, and also refuses to come to Jesus for His forgiveness. "Forgive us our sins as we forgive those who sin against us" - not well received by a lot of people.
Wendy

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thanks so much Wendy, for these gracious comments and a wonderful review, blessings Roy
Comment from Paul McFarland
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What a picture. I see by your notes that you have done quite a bit of traveling and seen both the good and bad of mankind. There are projects, here and there, that bring youngsters from various countries together to learn each other's cultures. We need to do more of this.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thanks again Paul, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from jenintorre
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You paint an extremely vivid and shocking picture with your words in this very well written poem. Wonderful rhyme and rhythm as always. Best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thanks so much Jen, for these gracious comments and a wonderful review, blessings Roy
Comment from karenina
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This is a lesson never learned... Hate begets hate, boundaries are made for conquests, Mankind kills and maims in the name of love of country, love of religion, love of power-- yet it is hate that blinds them.

Powerful write, Roy.

Karenina

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thanks so much Karen, for these gracious comments and a wonderful review, blessings Roy
reply by karenina on 18-Mar-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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The Russian soldiers are under Putin's command and have no choice but to blow Ukraine up, this is the responsibility of one man. He is pure evil and an example of human nature we have seen before in history and it never ends well, a poignant write Roy, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thanks so much Dolly, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy