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Comment from Benny Beeharry
True only too true. Death can never win. This world is a changing world and d at his only the change.
We are terrified because of our emotional attachment.if we give this up, we won't even notice it.but that's not possible for all of us. We love those we love and those near us. Separation become crosses .
The truth resides in not being attached. Yet this could seem hypocrisy.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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True only too true. Death can never win. This world is a changing world and d at his only the change.
We are terrified because of our emotional attachment.if we give this up, we won't even notice it.but that's not possible for all of us. We love those we love and those near us. Separation become crosses .
The truth resides in not being attached. Yet this could seem hypocrisy.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for finding this and reviewing..
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Thank you very much for finding this poem and reviewing...
Comment from Wendy G
That's a different slant on death, and it is fresh and original, with Death as a character on a stage, coming out of cue, and slipping onto a stage when he shouldn't . It is well written, and Linda will appreciate your poem in her book.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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That's a different slant on death, and it is fresh and original, with Death as a character on a stage, coming out of cue, and slipping onto a stage when he shouldn't . It is well written, and Linda will appreciate your poem in her book.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing.
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Thank you very much.
Comment from karenina
Beautiful poem....a wonderful gift of poetry and prayer for Linda, as she mourns the unexpected death of her brother! Done and Dickinson--great choices to integrate into this poem!
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Beautiful poem....a wonderful gift of poetry and prayer for Linda, as she mourns the unexpected death of her brother! Done and Dickinson--great choices to integrate into this poem!
Karenina
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much .
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Thank you very much.
Comment from lyenochka
Loved this, Santha! And that you make literary allusions to Donne and to Dickinson, makes this extra special. Thank you so much for adding your prayers and this beautiful poem of encouragement!
Suggestions but only if makes sense to you. Could be my American English:
to pick up someone out of turns (We take turns. But it's out of turn.)
Safe are they in God's arm (arms) somehow we use in the plural. But I know in the Hebrew Old Testament, they use the singular.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Loved this, Santha! And that you make literary allusions to Donne and to Dickinson, makes this extra special. Thank you so much for adding your prayers and this beautiful poem of encouragement!
Suggestions but only if makes sense to you. Could be my American English:
to pick up someone out of turns (We take turns. But it's out of turn.)
Safe are they in God's arm (arms) somehow we use in the plural. But I know in the Hebrew Old Testament, they use the singular.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you .Sorry for the delayed reply .I have made the corrections .That is me all over !
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Thank you, Helen .I have made the corrections. sorry for the delay ..
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have penned a powerful, expressive poem about the limited power of death. It can only take the body. The believer's soul resides with the Lord ("To be absent from the body is to be present with the Lord.")
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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You have penned a powerful, expressive poem about the limited power of death. It can only take the body. The believer's soul resides with the Lord ("To be absent from the body is to be present with the Lord.")
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much.
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
A fine contribution to the book. This packs a powerful punch as to the chilling truth that death often strikes unexpectedly. Uplifting ending as to rebirth.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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A fine contribution to the book. This packs a powerful punch as to the chilling truth that death often strikes unexpectedly. Uplifting ending as to rebirth.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much .
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you for sharing this and a tribute to Linda.. I've known her since I joined in 2018. She is a dear thing, and salt of the earth. Love her!
Sending you my best today as always, and many thanks for sharing,
Sally XOs
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you for sharing this and a tribute to Linda.. I've known her since I joined in 2018. She is a dear thing, and salt of the earth. Love her!
Sending you my best today as always, and many thanks for sharing,
Sally XOs
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well written poem. I liked the title of this poem. Your poem reads and flows well. I particularly liked the third, and fourth stanzas in this poem. Nice job.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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This is a well written poem. I liked the title of this poem. Your poem reads and flows well. I particularly liked the third, and fourth stanzas in this poem. Nice job.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from moongirlwriter
I think death is there to take those who don't have the believe that we are all energy. . .and the soul goes on for eternity. While our bodies do wear out, death does not and cannot take our soul, if we don't allow it to do that. This poem speaks of death not taking control, a strength that equals death. . .love will always win. Best of luck with this writing.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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I think death is there to take those who don't have the believe that we are all energy. . .and the soul goes on for eternity. While our bodies do wear out, death does not and cannot take our soul, if we don't allow it to do that. This poem speaks of death not taking control, a strength that equals death. . .love will always win. Best of luck with this writing.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for te thoughtful review.
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Sanku, that is lovely. Death doesn't go where we believe it should, old ones first, youngest last. Life isn't like that, and it does catch us out. It's so unfair, but it doesn't care. I'm sure Linda will find some comfort in your words. :) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Sanku, that is lovely. Death doesn't go where we believe it should, old ones first, youngest last. Life isn't like that, and it does catch us out. It's so unfair, but it doesn't care. I'm sure Linda will find some comfort in your words. :) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much.
