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Spring Green

The world awakens, refreshed.

7 total reviews 
Comment from in777wr#
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This is a wonderfully written poem. The entire poem is very creative. Each line connects well with the next line well. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is on point. Nice job.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
    Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
    Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from LisaMay
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I enjoyed the personification in your poem. It is easy to imagine the sleepy grass stretching and yawning then kicking off the white quilt. Your spring green background colour choice is certainly eye-catching.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
    Thank you! I'm excited that you enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
    Thank you! I'm excited that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Marienkiefer
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I love your poem.Especially the part about lush grass kicking of quilt of snow.
You paint a nice scenic picture
Nice imagery. Good luck on your entry!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
    Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
    Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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This 5-7-5 captures it's theme well.

The time when winter ends and spring begins does, as this poem illustrates, signify newness in nature as an awakening occurs.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thank you so much for your awesome review! Hugs.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thank you so much for your awesome review! Hugs.
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao poet,

To find a fresh new way to describe Spring is not easy.

I really thought you middle line was cool.

lush grass wakes up and stretches -

I enjoy cutting and trimming my green patch ..love the scent of cut grass and green is my favourite colour too.

A suggestion : put your writing in black.

Light green on white just fades making it hard to read your wee poem .

Keep safe!

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
    Thank you! I will definitely change the font to black. I am totally blind, and I was shooting for a dark green. But black works too! Thanks again!
reply by tempeste on 17-Mar-2022
    Even dark green is okay ..it just must be dark to stand out clearly.

    Ciao!
Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with very good imagery of spring
and nice choice of art work.

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not sure what these symbols are delete?

Good luck in the contest
Robert

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
    Thank you for the nice review, and thank you for pointing out the fan story code error. I'll fix that right away. Hugs.
Comment from jessizero
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It's a beautiful image you have created here. Thank you for writing this and for choosing to share it here. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
    Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review and comments. They are appreciated.