Comment from
Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good nature imagery with the
birds, rainbows, and clouds.
-A peaceful mood and a good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2022
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Comment from
Nottoway
A very succinct poem that reminds me of just why I have to sometimes go out upon the path less traveled. Nothing like a country road or a meandering stream/woodlands teeming with li life.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2022
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