Sloth Works
Deadly Sins contest entry6 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Congratulations on your win!
Keep writing such slothful writing and you'll keep crafting masterpieces in others' eyes. You've come up with another winner - that satirical theme works well.
I'm off to eat a slice of pie to console myself.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Congratulations on your win!
Keep writing such slothful writing and you'll keep crafting masterpieces in others' eyes. You've come up with another winner - that satirical theme works well.
I'm off to eat a slice of pie to console myself.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
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Lol. Thank you, Lisa. Eat a piece for me.
=]
Ron
Comment from Tom Horonzy
That's a lot of energy spent for a slothful guy. ......................... I don't believe you are. ........................................................................................................
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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That's a lot of energy spent for a slothful guy. ......................... I don't believe you are. ........................................................................................................
Comment Written 16-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Tom. Yeah, I had to try a little bit to sound slothful. lol I appreciate the stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I found this clever and creative in your using sloth as your "deadly" sin.
A very fun read. I wish you well in the contest.
I should not have read this first as now it will be a struggle for me to get the energy to read the other "sins"
Mary
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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I found this clever and creative in your using sloth as your "deadly" sin.
A very fun read. I wish you well in the contest.
I should not have read this first as now it will be a struggle for me to get the energy to read the other "sins"
Mary
Comment Written 16-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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lol I hope you made it through them. Thank you for the fantastic review and gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Yardier
Exceptionalllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
stunninggggggggggggggggggggggggg
Laizeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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4 gaught
Coffeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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Exceptionalllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
stunninggggggggggggggggggggggggg
Laizeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
U
4 gaught
Coffeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Comment Written 16-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
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lol Thank you for the hilarious review and giant sixer, Yardier. I needed a chuckle. I appreciate the great rating, friend. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Thank you again.
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem is the essence of sloth. It is witty and shows how bad the speaker is getting. By writing this poem, he/she might have more time to be slothful, for he/she may lose his/her job.
I won't even try to tell you all the errors you made on purpose. Because I know they won't and shouldn't be corrected. Does that make me smart or slothful?
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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This poem is the essence of sloth. It is witty and shows how bad the speaker is getting. By writing this poem, he/she might have more time to be slothful, for he/she may lose his/her job.
I won't even try to tell you all the errors you made on purpose. Because I know they won't and shouldn't be corrected. Does that make me smart or slothful?
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 16-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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Lol. Thank you for the fantastic and hilarious review, Joan. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
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Don't mention it
JOan
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very clever. It's always fun to read an original piece. I am just the opposite when it comes to all those things that you mentioned, and it drives me crazy when something slips throughh.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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Very clever. It's always fun to read an original piece. I am just the opposite when it comes to all those things that you mentioned, and it drives me crazy when something slips throughh.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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Lol. Yeah, that bugs me too. I can reread something I've written fifty time over but still manage to miss something simple. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Paul. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
