The Unashamed Glutton
Sweet treats are irresistible.14 total reviews
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well written gluttonous poem. This poem is the very definition of gluttony. Your rhyming scheme is consistent throughout the poem. Nice job.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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This is a well written gluttonous poem. This poem is the very definition of gluttony. Your rhyming scheme is consistent throughout the poem. Nice job.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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Thanks for these supportive comments.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Thatguypk
A delightfully amusing piece of writing, accompanied by a mouth-watering piece of your own artwork. I'm also a bit of a glutton, but where you go for the sweet stuff, I tend towards Chinese takeaways. So unhealthy... but the wife rations me to one takeaway per fortnight! :-)
Thanks for such an enjoyable read.
PK
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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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A delightfully amusing piece of writing, accompanied by a mouth-watering piece of your own artwork. I'm also a bit of a glutton, but where you go for the sweet stuff, I tend towards Chinese takeaways. So unhealthy... but the wife rations me to one takeaway per fortnight! :-)
Thanks for such an enjoyable read.
PK
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Comment Written 16-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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I had fun writing it so I'm pleased you enjoyed the humour.
I thought Chinese takeaways were healthy - all those vegetables.
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Vegetables??? Beef in Black Bean Sauce! Sweet and Sour Pork! Fried Rice! Greasy Spring Roles! Salt and Chilli King Prawns! Who buys veg from the Chinese? :-) Best wishes.
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Gee whizz!! Here in New Zealand there are lots of veggies with Chinese food - bean sprouts, bok choy cabbage, carrots, beans, peas, corn, onion...
but of course it is the fried stuff with sticky sauces that is most appealing.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Doesn't veggies have two "g"s? I love an occasional cake and my local supermarket sells fresh chocolate muffins and they are to die for, you made my mouth water here, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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Doesn't veggies have two "g"s? I love an occasional cake and my local supermarket sells fresh chocolate muffins and they are to die for, you made my mouth water here, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 16-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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I don't think I've ever seen it written down. I had 2 gg's to begin with then I thought as vegetables only has one g then so should vegies...
But I have checked now on the internet and you are right... so I changed it back to veggies. Now where did I put my cake?
Comment from Carlos' girl
Yesssa. This poem really speaks to me. You see, sweets are one of the food groups. And we need our allotment. Marzipan. Bring it on. I love the bawdy humor of your poem.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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Yesssa. This poem really speaks to me. You see, sweets are one of the food groups. And we need our allotment. Marzipan. Bring it on. I love the bawdy humor of your poem.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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Thanks for this super review, fellow sweets-eater.
I'm glad you enjoyed the humour - I had fun writing it.
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It was a sweet delight
