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Comment from Malcolm Rothery
What a wonderful little poem and very true observation. Love the picture! We've all been there, I'm sure. That red mist moment is something you have to rein in however hard that is. How many lives have been ruined by having a crazy few seconds?
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What a wonderful little poem and very true observation. Love the picture! We've all been there, I'm sure. That red mist moment is something you have to rein in however hard that is. How many lives have been ruined by having a crazy few seconds?
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
Comment from jessizero
This is a good message you've managed to spread in just a few words. Anger can lead to doom if it is unchecked.
Thank you for choosing to share this here. Best wishes.
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This is a good message you've managed to spread in just a few words. Anger can lead to doom if it is unchecked.
Thank you for choosing to share this here. Best wishes.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well written poem. The picture you chose definitely compliments this poem well. Your message is good, and your poem flows well. I see you used the 5--7-5 syllable count. Nice job.
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This is a well written poem. The picture you chose definitely compliments this poem well. Your message is good, and your poem flows well. I see you used the 5--7-5 syllable count. Nice job.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
