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Didn't Lose My Pride

Contest Entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from prettybluebirds
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Nothing wrong with being proud of something you are good at. That is, as long as you don't brag and throw it up to others who are not as good. This is a well crafted writing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
    Thank you for your encouragement!
Comment from in777wr#
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This is a well written poem. You followed the writing prompt well. Pride is one of the Deadly Sins. The message in the poem is very clear. Nice poem.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
    Thank you!
reply by in777wr# on 15-Mar-2022
    You're very welcome.
reply by in777wr# on 15-Mar-2022
    You're very welcome.
reply by in777wr# on 15-Mar-2022
    You're very welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed reading and reviewing your contest entry. Your words highlight the pride you feel in yourself and as part of a team. I like the choice of free verse to express your thoughts and feelings.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
    Thank you!