Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet, you now have 6 votes!

I thought your wee poem flowed best and your message is clear .

Here on earth , we struggle because the devil is at work to make us fall.

People think that money can give you happiness but that s not true.

Buying material things like fast cars, speed boats, clothes, shoes make you happy only temporarily.

We should instead focus on desires that feed our inner soul and please God.

Desires like love , justice , faith, compassion etc ,

Desires that ultimately will earn us eternal life with God in heaven.

Keep safe!

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022

You have a good head on your shoulders tempeste:) you speak words of wisdom.
Yes, amassing material wealth is not success. Success is knowing happiness cannot be purchased, only realized through moments of clarity.

I managed a second place in this one - thanks for your vote ;)

Have you been posting much lately? I haven't been receiving many prompts about your posts..

reply by tempeste on 17-Mar-2022

Actually,I my entry for the 242 contest came 3. Unfortunately ,I had an argument with the pookietoo, who set up the contest.

I know the rules are to be passive but when someone I feel is treating in a shit way ,I lash back ..( Dutch and Italians can be quiet animated..but I did manage to keep it civil ). You can check it out in the reviews for my CELINE DION entry with pookietoo.

And my entry Rock,Paper and scissors came second with 7 votes. I actually like this entry , I voiced my opinion on the USA,China and Russia who are playing their power games.

reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022

Whaaaaa I don't think I'm getting the prompts of your posts like I'm supposed to. Hmmm

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Another good entry for this twelve words in a sentence. You have used the three words wisely to convey a message of hope when leaving this wretched place of earth.
My only suggestion would be to write the twelve words so it displays as one sentence and like it is in poem format.
Good luck in the contest with this entry.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022

I'm glad you suggested I put it all together in one sentence; I was struggling with whether to do that or not as I was crafting it. I've made the change - better thanks

Comment from in777wr#

Excellent

This is a well written sentence. The three required words are use. The required punctuation is used without any additional ones. The sentence is coherent. Nice job.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022

Thank you

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 12Word-1-Sentence Spiritual Fiction contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022

Thanks much