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Crossroads

A 2-6-2 Poem

7 total reviews 
Comment from in777wr#
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I like the message in this poem. This poem is well written and the poem flows well. The picture you chose compliments this poem well. Each line connected with the other line well. Nice job.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
    Thank you very much
reply by in777wr# on 15-Mar-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from jessizero
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"Walk by faith, not by sight." You've done a good job expressing that here in just 10 syllables. Thank you for choosing to share this here. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
    Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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A good entry for the 2-6-2 poem contest.
I enjoyed the spiritual aspect of this piece.
Just a slight edit - shown in ( ).

crossroads (one word)
my faith always shows me
which way (or - the way - works too)

Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
    Thank you my friend, I have taken your advice and it does read and look better
reply by PoemsOfDD on 14-Mar-2022
    Yes, it looks much better now ;-) Good luck. ~DD
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
    Thank you
Comment from Ricky1024
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"Crossroads"
This is a 2-6-3 writing prompt entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this one and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
    Thank you very much
reply by Ricky1024 on 14-Mar-2022
Comment from city gal
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I find this to be a spiritual message beautifully encapsulated in a 2-6-2 poem. I really like this poem and of course, the artwork is stunning.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
    Thank you very much, yes you are spot on
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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The picture adds to your poem but isn't necessary as you make it clear how you know the right way to go. Faith is a wonderful thing with all the guidance we need to reach our heavenly home.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2022

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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The picture adds to your poem but isn't necessary as you make it clear how you know the right way to go. Faith is a wonderful thing with all the guidance we need to reach our heavenly home.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2022

reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
    Thank you very much, I will consider about the artwork, many thanks
reply by Carol Hillebrenner on 14-Mar-2022
    I am not saying there is anything wrong with the artwork. It's just that you write so clearly no one could misunderstand you.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
    Yes I understood that and I agree, I like how the words may speak for themselves, I took your comments as a compliment-sorry if I confused your wonderful coments