Goodbye to Winter
Worn out winter leaves to make room for spring.15 total reviews
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
The picture is perfect. They look like work boots. And the short poem created a great story. You have a big story in a few lines. Thank you for sharing your post. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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The picture is perfect. They look like work boots. And the short poem created a great story. You have a big story in a few lines. Thank you for sharing your post. Have a great day.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for a great review.
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You are welcome
Comment from Anne Johnston
I like your illustration of winter being like worn-out boots and spring being white satin slippers. A great contrast and a perfect picture you have chosen to illustrate your poem.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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I like your illustration of winter being like worn-out boots and spring being white satin slippers. A great contrast and a perfect picture you have chosen to illustrate your poem.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you for an excellent rating and review!
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You are welcome
Comment from LisaMay
This is lovely! Your imagery in personification comparing the two seasons fits beautifully, contrasting tired old winter making way for the delicate exuberance of youthful spring.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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This is lovely! Your imagery in personification comparing the two seasons fits beautifully, contrasting tired old winter making way for the delicate exuberance of youthful spring.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your kind review.
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well written poem. Your syllable count is on point. Your message is clear. I am glad the winter appears to be over. We are having a bit of cold weather today. Overall, your poem is good.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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This is a well written poem. Your syllable count is on point. Your message is clear. I am glad the winter appears to be over. We are having a bit of cold weather today. Overall, your poem is good.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thanks for a very good review. It was almost 80 degrees two days ago here. This morning it was 33, and we had about five minutes of snow.
Comment from jessizero
I like the images of seasons as footwear. It paints a lovely picture, especially when spring arrives. Thank you for sharing this poem. Keep up the good work.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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I like the images of seasons as footwear. It paints a lovely picture, especially when spring arrives. Thank you for sharing this poem. Keep up the good work.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you for you kind review.
