Grace
Saying Grace at night5 total reviews
Comment from in777wr#
This is a cute poem. The poem flows well, and your message is clear. I liked that it rhymed. There appears to be no wasted words in this poem. You followed the writing prompt well. Nice job. Congratulations with your 1st post.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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This is a cute poem. The poem flows well, and your message is clear. I liked that it rhymed. There appears to be no wasted words in this poem. You followed the writing prompt well. Nice job. Congratulations with your 1st post.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from RodG
Because the Speaker describes the setting as she says grace each night, we see her (perhaps kneeling) in the moonlight. But replace weak prepositions with strong verbs. For example: The moonlight BASKS my face.
Rod
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Because the Speaker describes the setting as she says grace each night, we see her (perhaps kneeling) in the moonlight. But replace weak prepositions with strong verbs. For example: The moonlight BASKS my face.
Rod
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the review and I appreciate the recommendations.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is short and sweet, with much meaning. You have a great story in a few lines written in poem form. Thank you for the great poem. Have a great day and stay safe.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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This is short and sweet, with much meaning. You have a great story in a few lines written in poem form. Thank you for the great poem. Have a great day and stay safe.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations on your milestone post! I like your two line poem very much. It was perfect. Thank you for choosing to share this poem here. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Congratulations on your milestone post! I like your two line poem very much. It was perfect. Thank you for choosing to share this poem here. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your review, I hope to use this creative outlet often.
Comment from robyn corum
Carma,
Hello, and welcome to FanStory! I expect you will come to love it as much as the rest of us. hahaha
I do like your two-line poem. It's sweet and quiet, like the time of day that's portrayed. It's a remarkable reminder for us all that the very God who made the moonlight is the One who'll be listening to those prayers. How cool is that?
Thanks so much!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Carma,
Hello, and welcome to FanStory! I expect you will come to love it as much as the rest of us. hahaha
I do like your two-line poem. It's sweet and quiet, like the time of day that's portrayed. It's a remarkable reminder for us all that the very God who made the moonlight is the One who'll be listening to those prayers. How cool is that?
Thanks so much!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the welcome and the review, I hope to use this creative outlet often.
