Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from Sanku
Wild animals coming out of their habitats into human settlement has given to worry all over the world .WE have leopards coming out to kill cattle and goats .There is a national park surrounding the teeming city of Mumbai(Bombay) Leopards often stray into the city to catch street dogs! Destruction of forests have dwindled their food sources...
Enjoyed reading their outing and the mouthwatering pic of the ribeye steak..
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Wild animals coming out of their habitats into human settlement has given to worry all over the world .WE have leopards coming out to kill cattle and goats .There is a national park surrounding the teeming city of Mumbai(Bombay) Leopards often stray into the city to catch street dogs! Destruction of forests have dwindled their food sources...
Enjoyed reading their outing and the mouthwatering pic of the ribeye steak..
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
A very good section as Cord is obviously helping her loosen up. It is a little worrisome that Pat is there. Wonder what is next when they go dancing. Have a lovely time visiting your son. One letter missing-- . . . salmon and move(d) it . . .
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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A very good section as Cord is obviously helping her loosen up. It is a little worrisome that Pat is there. Wonder what is next when they go dancing. Have a lovely time visiting your son. One letter missing-- . . . salmon and move(d) it . . .
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the catch. I have made the correction.
Comment from amahra
A fine chapter, Barbara. That whole scene and your artwork made me cave a midnight snack. I don't know how you can write two romance novels at the same time. Good job.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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A fine chapter, Barbara. That whole scene and your artwork made me cave a midnight snack. I don't know how you can write two romance novels at the same time. Good job.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank for the kind review. After today's post, I only have one more post of Football.
Comment from judiverse
I'm hoping Alex will tell Cord about Pat being there. He could easily set him straight. Cord gets himself a vet case while at the restaurant. It's funny to think of a guy who's used to horses and cattle treating a little dog. Alex lets her guard down, but just a little bit. She's still holding back. Cord's charm will begin working on her, though. Excellent story development. judi
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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I'm hoping Alex will tell Cord about Pat being there. He could easily set him straight. Cord gets himself a vet case while at the restaurant. It's funny to think of a guy who's used to horses and cattle treating a little dog. Alex lets her guard down, but just a little bit. She's still holding back. Cord's charm will begin working on her, though. Excellent story development. judi
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Before going back home Cord had a vet practice in Houston, more about that is coming. So far it was just briefly mentioned. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I'll be going back out to eat for the second time today thanks to you. But I'll bet that I don't find a steak that looks anything like as tasty as the one in your picture. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter. :-)
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Well, I'll be going back out to eat for the second time today thanks to you. But I'll bet that I don't find a steak that looks anything like as tasty as the one in your picture. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter. :-)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a great chapter. I seemed to have missed a bunch in between. I'll have to go back where I came in and catch up. have a wonderful trip. Stay safe
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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This is a great chapter. I seemed to have missed a bunch in between. I'll have to go back where I came in and catch up. have a wonderful trip. Stay safe
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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If you have questions, I will be happy to answer. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Annette R.
Having not read the previous 6 chapters I'm not sure I can be of much help. I do like the large font. I didn't know we could use images from Google. The dialogue (something I have to work on) is very good. I can see this chapter building the relationship.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Having not read the previous 6 chapters I'm not sure I can be of much help. I do like the large font. I didn't know we could use images from Google. The dialogue (something I have to work on) is very good. I can see this chapter building the relationship.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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I get all my photos from google. Just before to acknowledge it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Cord seems to be a busy Veternaian. And you hooked me into the story. I wondered how Alexandra felt about the server talking about her dog's ear infection? And the older couple about the bulls? I know things happen. However, it seems rude to interrupt a couple having dinner. And, being on the first date, a man assumes it is okay to say he will have half of her meat. You have a great story. Everyone has different opinions.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Cord seems to be a busy Veternaian. And you hooked me into the story. I wondered how Alexandra felt about the server talking about her dog's ear infection? And the older couple about the bulls? I know things happen. However, it seems rude to interrupt a couple having dinner. And, being on the first date, a man assumes it is okay to say he will have half of her meat. You have a great story. Everyone has different opinions.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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True, first nobody knows it's a first date, plus it's a very small town. In small towns liberties are always taken. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are so welcome. And I look forward to reading your great writing.
Comment from royowen
So, the relationship is being established and the descriptive text is a fabulous one and I really enjoyed it. I think most of us can identify with the restaurant scenes, but the bit with Pat's image gave it that tinge of drama, well done, good writing blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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So, the relationship is being established and the descriptive text is a fabulous one and I really enjoyed it. I think most of us can identify with the restaurant scenes, but the bit with Pat's image gave it that tinge of drama, well done, good writing blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. More about Pat will be coming out.
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A good bad guy
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a nice chapter with Ali and Cordero getting to know a little bit more about each other. Still, Ali is afraid to open up about her past boyfriend. And I too wonder what Pat was doing there. I look forward to finding out more about these things, and how the dancing goes.
I noticed a couple of little typos:
"teased Alexandra as she motioning(motioned or was motioning) for Sarah"
"Cordero cut part of his salmon and move(d) it to Alexandra's plate."
"I have a feeling(;) she'll find a spot for at least one bite." - no semi-colon required. Probably a slip of a finger :)
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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This is a nice chapter with Ali and Cordero getting to know a little bit more about each other. Still, Ali is afraid to open up about her past boyfriend. And I too wonder what Pat was doing there. I look forward to finding out more about these things, and how the dancing goes.
I noticed a couple of little typos:
"teased Alexandra as she motioning(motioned or was motioning) for Sarah"
"Cordero cut part of his salmon and move(d) it to Alexandra's plate."
"I have a feeling(;) she'll find a spot for at least one bite." - no semi-colon required. Probably a slip of a finger :)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the catches. I have made the corrections.
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You're welcome, Barbara.
