Abandoned to You
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
So little material makes it difficult to critique what one writes. Lines one and two had set me up for a bigger bite, but gave me a small taste instead. .........................
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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So little material makes it difficult to critique what one writes. Lines one and two had set me up for a bigger bite, but gave me a small taste instead. .........................
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your thought-provoking and constructive review. I appreciate it.
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good morning.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, John.
-I like your topic and poem.
-You do a good job of describing emotions
with your effective examples.
-Each line has a very good, positive message.
-You obviously care about this person
"because of Who You are."
-A very good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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-Nice image and presentation, John.
-I like your topic and poem.
-You do a good job of describing emotions
with your effective examples.
-Each line has a very good, positive message.
-You obviously care about this person
"because of Who You are."
-A very good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for you kind and positive review. I really appreciate it. John
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You are very welcome, John.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is great. A few lines with so much truth and meaning. I really like the picture also. You have a sincere story written from a kind heart. Thank you for posting this great poem.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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This is great. A few lines with so much truth and meaning. I really like the picture also. You have a sincere story written from a kind heart. Thank you for posting this great poem.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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My thanks to you for your kind review. John
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There's a spiritual emotion in your words here as you offer yourself and your belief in your faith without expecting anything in return, I enjoyed the sentiment here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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There's a spiritual emotion in your words here as you offer yourself and your belief in your faith without expecting anything in return, I enjoyed the sentiment here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Dolly for your review and clear understanding of my poem. I appreciate it. John
Comment from royowen
The wonderful thing about God is that He has a nature I want to emulate, but alas and alack I fall a wee bit short of that nature, but I know one day I'll see Him as He is, beautifully written John, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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The wonderful thing about God is that He has a nature I want to emulate, but alas and alack I fall a wee bit short of that nature, but I know one day I'll see Him as He is, beautifully written John, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thanks, my friend. Some of us fall a wee bit more than a wee bit short. Unfortunately, I fall in that category. But we have a God with limitless mercy, and for that we are endlessly grateful.
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No John, you are the same as me.
Comment from robyn corum
John,
A beautiful sentiment. This is inspiring and motivating and certainly, an emotion all of us who are Christians should strive to feel and LIVE every moment of every day. It's truly lovely. Thank you!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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John,
A beautiful sentiment. This is inspiring and motivating and certainly, an emotion all of us who are Christians should strive to feel and LIVE every moment of every day. It's truly lovely. Thank you!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Robyn. Your review and sweet comments go to the very heart of this writing. You are truly blessed to have such wisdom and understanding.
Comment from jessizero
Amen, and amen again. You captured this perfectly, and I have nothing to say that would improve on this. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem here. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Amen, and amen again. You captured this perfectly, and I have nothing to say that would improve on this. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem here. Best wishes.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Your kind review is much appreciated and more than I deserve. Thank you so much. John
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed your poem. You did a nice job with the prompt. Your topic is relatable and creative. The photo works well and sets the tone immediately. You were able to capture the emotion intended.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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I enjoyed your poem. You did a nice job with the prompt. Your topic is relatable and creative. The photo works well and sets the tone immediately. You were able to capture the emotion intended.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your review. John
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. I understand what your words allude too. The image is a great pairing with your well thought out words. I agree with them, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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You did a good job with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. I understand what your words allude too. The image is a great pairing with your well thought out words. I agree with them, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Jan for your review and best wishes. John
Comment from Sally Law
Good morning, John! It is so good to see. I enjoyed spiritual your short verse poem. I feel the same. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Good morning, John! It is so good to see. I enjoyed spiritual your short verse poem. I feel the same. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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So good to hear from you too, Sally. You always understand my writing and I highly appreciate your wise comments and reviews. Thank you. John
