Don't forget to Remember.
The beauty of the world.72 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Yes, the people of Ukraine have much to be worried about. It is easy to forget the beauty around us. I enjoyed reading this well-written poem. Good luck with the contest.
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Yes, the people of Ukraine have much to be worried about. It is easy to forget the beauty around us. I enjoyed reading this well-written poem. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
Comment from in777wr#
This was a well written poem. Your poem reads and flows well. God has given us beautiful things to enjoy. The last stanza of your poem suns it up well.
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This was a well written poem. Your poem reads and flows well. God has given us beautiful things to enjoy. The last stanza of your poem suns it up well.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
Comment from Dawn Munro
I am delighted to have discovered your writing. I am not here nearly as often as I once was, but if everything you write is as lovely as this wee poem, I am surely going to enjoy following you.
Blessings, my friend, and best of luck in the contest!
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I am delighted to have discovered your writing. I am not here nearly as often as I once was, but if everything you write is as lovely as this wee poem, I am surely going to enjoy following you.
Blessings, my friend, and best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
Comment from Sharon Davis
This poem is uplifting and offers an instant mood booster.
I enjoyed your use of simple, descriptive language that invokes positive imagery relating to NAture's beauty.
The image included is a perfect fit to highlight the lightness of the theme.
Thank you for sharing this work.
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This poem is uplifting and offers an instant mood booster.
I enjoyed your use of simple, descriptive language that invokes positive imagery relating to NAture's beauty.
The image included is a perfect fit to highlight the lightness of the theme.
Thank you for sharing this work.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a beautifully delicate poem that is written with a tender hand. I love that you wrote about spring, which is my favorite season. I agree that with the hellish news day in and day and feel agony for the people suffering, your poem reminds me that each day is a miracle.
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This is a beautifully delicate poem that is written with a tender hand. I love that you wrote about spring, which is my favorite season. I agree that with the hellish news day in and day and feel agony for the people suffering, your poem reminds me that each day is a miracle.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned for the No Rules Poetry Contest entry. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the No Rules Poetry Contest entry. You used very good descriptive words and very beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
Comment from royowen
Yes Willie, when we see the devastation around us, when hear of the terrible things happening in Ukraine, I read there was rumours there might be a coup in Russia, but then why would we hear of it? The beauty of this world, reveals a beautiful God, without spot or blemish, no shadow of turning, with hope for a lost world. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
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Yes Willie, when we see the devastation around us, when hear of the terrible things happening in Ukraine, I read there was rumours there might be a coup in Russia, but then why would we hear of it? The beauty of this world, reveals a beautiful God, without spot or blemish, no shadow of turning, with hope for a lost world. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I agree. There is beauty in everything in nature. Many are too busy to stop and admire it and be thankful for it. Your poem has a great message. Yes, at present Ukraine occupies our thoughts, but even with the tragic war, there is beauty in little things. Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
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I agree. There is beauty in everything in nature. Many are too busy to stop and admire it and be thankful for it. Your poem has a great message. Yes, at present Ukraine occupies our thoughts, but even with the tragic war, there is beauty in little things. Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
This is by far one of the most beautiful poems, I have ever read! I express these exact sentiments every morning, as we watch the birds playing with each other in the bird feeder. All different kinds, that all seem to get along. I often make reference to how can anyone doubt God's existence, when there is just no other explanation of where all this beauty comes from.
I feel like you've been reading my mind, as your poem described my love for nature too. It certainly is refreshing, as it has nothing to do w Covid or war.
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This is by far one of the most beautiful poems, I have ever read! I express these exact sentiments every morning, as we watch the birds playing with each other in the bird feeder. All different kinds, that all seem to get along. I often make reference to how can anyone doubt God's existence, when there is just no other explanation of where all this beauty comes from.
I feel like you've been reading my mind, as your poem described my love for nature too. It certainly is refreshing, as it has nothing to do w Covid or war.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
Comment from country ranch writer
War and devastation spoils the beauty of one's country being demolished buy a tyrant like Putin oh my God such devastation!there is no longer beauty to be had as war creeps closer and closer.
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War and devastation spoils the beauty of one's country being demolished buy a tyrant like Putin oh my God such devastation!there is no longer beauty to be had as war creeps closer and closer.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
