Don't forget to Remember.
The beauty of the world.72 total reviews
Comment from Carma McNeil
I really liked your poem. It is sad but true that we don't take time to remember and notice God's beauty around us. Instead we focus on all the negative and ugly in the world. Thank you for your lovely work.
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I really liked your poem. It is sad but true that we don't take time to remember and notice God's beauty around us. Instead we focus on all the negative and ugly in the world. Thank you for your lovely work.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
The horrors of the day often make some forget but the aging process has many refocus to what is important, and in whose hand our souls will rest. Pick your faith in varying colors but God sees everything in black and white and will be our judge and our defense attorney will be what we remember doing along with the why, where, when.
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The horrors of the day often make some forget but the aging process has many refocus to what is important, and in whose hand our souls will rest. Pick your faith in varying colors but God sees everything in black and white and will be our judge and our defense attorney will be what we remember doing along with the why, where, when.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
Comment from Paul McFarland
You are right. The horror that is taking place in Ukraine does make it difficult to enjoy the good things in life. If war comes to our shores, we will be in deep trouble with the leader that we have.
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You are right. The horror that is taking place in Ukraine does make it difficult to enjoy the good things in life. If war comes to our shores, we will be in deep trouble with the leader that we have.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Your nature poem is a beautiful symbol of the gifs God bestows in us every day--especially the gift of life.
I like the way each of your stanzas celebrates another gift we get.
Exceptional work.
Blessings,
Cindy
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Your nature poem is a beautiful symbol of the gifs God bestows in us every day--especially the gift of life.
I like the way each of your stanzas celebrates another gift we get.
Exceptional work.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. A wonderful and beautiful poem. Excellent work! No mistakes. Good luck in the contest!
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. A wonderful and beautiful poem. Excellent work! No mistakes. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
Comment from Terry Broxson
Amen, brother! I don't who that leader is, but we need one to emerge. This is a lovely poem for this contest, good luck. You have excellent rhymes, a great flow from thought to thought, and a very nice message. Good work. Terry.
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Amen, brother! I don't who that leader is, but we need one to emerge. This is a lovely poem for this contest, good luck. You have excellent rhymes, a great flow from thought to thought, and a very nice message. Good work. Terry.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
Comment from JanPerry
A wonderful entry. I can see you have spent much time creating this. It's rhyming perfection.
ABCB rhyming. The last stanza has an important message. Enjoy the beauty of nature and forget all the horrors the world is currently facing. These horrors are never ending it seems and the news will remind us that everyday.
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A wonderful entry. I can see you have spent much time creating this. It's rhyming perfection.
ABCB rhyming. The last stanza has an important message. Enjoy the beauty of nature and forget all the horrors the world is currently facing. These horrors are never ending it seems and the news will remind us that everyday.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
Comment from Pearl Edwards
In these times when there is so much bad news, it is important to sit and soak in the beauty. Nicely said in your poem, and good luck in the contest. Cheers
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In these times when there is so much bad news, it is important to sit and soak in the beauty. Nicely said in your poem, and good luck in the contest. Cheers
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Willie P. a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your no rules poetry contest entry, you executed it well with good rhymes and a nice message. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello Willie P. a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your no rules poetry contest entry, you executed it well with good rhymes and a nice message. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Willie,
This group of abcb quatrains gives us good advice. Enjoying the beauty of the world keeps us physically, mentally and spiritually well. We need to let go of the stresses of the world and let peace in.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Hi Willie,
This group of abcb quatrains gives us good advice. Enjoying the beauty of the world keeps us physically, mentally and spiritually well. We need to let go of the stresses of the world and let peace in.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
