Time
the progression of grief3 total reviews
Comment from Regina Elliott
I love the hopefulness and
especially the ending of this
poem. You weaved it so well.
I hope you have a grand
weekend full of creativity and
ideas for another poem.
Sometimes the title of a
potential poem just pops into my mind. ~
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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I love the hopefulness and
especially the ending of this
poem. You weaved it so well.
I hope you have a grand
weekend full of creativity and
ideas for another poem.
Sometimes the title of a
potential poem just pops into my mind. ~
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise poem is moving and expressive--allowing tears to serve their purpose, then storing them away "for some future day." Today is a blessing.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Your ultra-concise poem is moving and expressive--allowing tears to serve their purpose, then storing them away "for some future day." Today is a blessing.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your review.
Comment from in777wr#
This is a very good poem. Each line flows well. Your message is clear. There appears to be no wasted words in this poem. The personification in the poem is great. The last stanza concludes this poem well. Good job.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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This is a very good poem. Each line flows well. Your message is clear. There appears to be no wasted words in this poem. The personification in the poem is great. The last stanza concludes this poem well. Good job.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your review.
