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Snippets

a collection of quotes

34 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I think I may need a translator? He he he, you obviously have a close connection here and use your own special language to communicate, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    Thanks. Kel and I are very close.
Comment from Wendy G
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Five stars for the humour and love that you share. Keep a note of all those special little sayings. As it is it's not really a script but it does let us get to know you a bit more. And that's good.
Wendy

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    Thanks so much.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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I gave you five stars because these are hilarious. The one I particularly liked was about forgetting the key... AGAIN. But no, I don't think they belong in scripts. The best use for them would be to take each one and weave a very short flash fiction around it. You will see, contests come up regularly for 50 words, 75, 80, 100 etc.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    Thanks for the input. I appreciate it.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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These are interesting quotes...some are humorous and others are painful to read. Others are just sad and point to your sister being under the influence of a drug of some sort. In your author's notes, you say she was on painkillers for years... which explains a lot.
Thanks for sharing these poignant quotes between you and your sister!
Take care,
Jesse


 Comment Written 11-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    Thanks so much for reading and sharing.
reply by Jesse James Doty on 11-Mar-2022
    You're welcome, Jessizero! I like how you are branching out to tackle scripts and other sorts of posts!
    Jesse
Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for sharing the giggles! I think it's great that you are able to chronicle these for the precious memories they represent. You and your sister seem to be so close! What a blessing!

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    My sister and I are best friends. It is a blessing.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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Excellent! This was so refreshing. Not poetry, not a long drawn out story, but actual quotes between two real people. I chuckled out loud to all of this but this one made me laugh out LOUD.

[Discussing why not to buy a hideous dress.]

Jessi: You'd only wear it in an extreme emergency.
Kelli: Like what kind of emergency?
Jessi: If you had to be naked.
Kelli: I'd rather be naked.

All so funny and amusing. You and Kelli must have a lot of fun together. I miss that with my girlfriends and my sister - all who do not live in the same country as me. Thank you for making me smile and laugh all in the space of a minute. Enjoy the six shower. ~DDxo

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    Thanks for reading and replying
Comment from Versch
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I wish I have a sister that I could share laughter and everything else the way you two are in this snippets of conversation. It is obvious how close you sisters are. This is an excellent script, couldn't get anymore realistic than this. Blessings to you!

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    Thanks so much
Comment from John Ciarmello
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These snippets are full of just the right kind of humor. What makes them stand out is the fact that they are real and not forced. You have a great sense of humor. I enjoyed this, Jessi.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Spitfire
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You are such a chuckle. My favorite snippets (the ones that made me laugh out loud): Why not to buy a hideous dress; stupid joke. I bet your sister is always on pain medication because your humor 'cracks' her up. :-)

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
    Thanks so much! My sister is hilarious, though.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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Haha. This is funny. You can turn it into a real script with you, your sister and your mother as characters. You need to use script formatting, too like "FADE IN:INT.LIVING ROOM" or "FADE IN:EXT.YARD".
You need to have "SETTING:"

You are good at humor.



 Comment Written 10-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
    Thank you. I'm not a scriptwriter, though, so I really don't think I'll be making this into a real script. I appreciate that you thought I could, though!