I Fly
We all need distance6 total reviews
Comment from Richard Melnick
Mia, Magnificent! Well said. There is nothing like controlled flight to take us away from and we'll above the sometimes rude earth.
Excellent 5-7-5.
I have tried to fly many times yet my arms can't flap quickly enough.
Oh, to be free as a bird, indeed.
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Mia, Magnificent! Well said. There is nothing like controlled flight to take us away from and we'll above the sometimes rude earth.
Excellent 5-7-5.
I have tried to fly many times yet my arms can't flap quickly enough.
Oh, to be free as a bird, indeed.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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If only we could fly like the birds.
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your 5-7-5. That "distancing" from our hurt is so important to healing. I like the analogy of a bird flying free in the sky and from that perspective, it's easier to let go of the hurt. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Great job with your 5-7-5. That "distancing" from our hurt is so important to healing. I like the analogy of a bird flying free in the sky and from that perspective, it's easier to let go of the hurt. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Mia,
I like the strength the words of your poem paints.
It's so difficult sometimes to rise above the mire of our lives, but I really believe God gives us wings to soar, if we ask of Him.
Good luck with your excellent writing,
Cindy
The photo and poem are great work.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Mia,
I like the strength the words of your poem paints.
It's so difficult sometimes to rise above the mire of our lives, but I really believe God gives us wings to soar, if we ask of Him.
Good luck with your excellent writing,
Cindy
The photo and poem are great work.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work.
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You?re welcome, Mia.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is a great poem with a few lines. I enjoyed reading your poem. And the bird is a perfect picture to tell your story. Thank you for posting your poem on this site. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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This is a great poem with a few lines. I enjoyed reading your poem. And the bird is a perfect picture to tell your story. Thank you for posting your poem on this site. Have a great day.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nice Haiku. "Wings of freedom" is a really good phrase. How long can you stay in flight before you have to come back down to "the hurt below"?
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Nice Haiku. "Wings of freedom" is a really good phrase. How long can you stay in flight before you have to come back down to "the hurt below"?
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to review.
Comment from jessizero
You're right. We all need distance. You've expressed that beautifully here. Thank you for choosing to share this poem with the community. Best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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You're right. We all need distance. You've expressed that beautifully here. Thank you for choosing to share this poem with the community. Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thank you.
